By Crys
Reviews
Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Saturday 28th October 2006 12:32pm
Interesting method to bring out new capabilities in Harry's fighting skills.
I just love this tale.
siaru posted a comment on Saturday 28th October 2006 10:42am
Awww... I'm bitterly disappointed. I was hoping for something like:
"Sonorus. ARE YOU DEAF, OLD MAN? HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO ASK YOU NOT TO USE MY GIVEN NAME? IS THIS LOUD ENOUGH? DO YOU HEAR ME NOW? OR ARE YOU MERELY SENILE?"
...Actually, I lied. I'm mightily enjoying this tale, even given Harry's quite sensible restraint. Please continue.
Crys replied:
*laugh* Great idea, that.
Don't think it has a place in Scion, but I'd love to see this approach used somewhere.
Thanks for the review!
DJ posted a comment on Saturday 28th October 2006 10:41am
Nice work thanks for not sticking us with a cliffy. Keep the grate work coming.
Gardengirl posted a comment on Saturday 28th October 2006 10:27am
Your Dumbledore is deeply unlikeable. That's a stretch for me, and you do it well. Thanks!
Alex00 posted a comment on Saturday 28th October 2006 10:23am
Great work.
Shadow High Angel posted a comment on Saturday 28th October 2006 9:44am
Great chapter, and yes the last cliffhanger was evil. This ending was however perfect, loved how the meeting went after his announcement and like the new side of Hermione this Ravenclaw has brought out.
toolbandfanatic posted a comment on Thursday 19th October 2006 2:22am
I really like this story
rm posted a comment on Wednesday 18th October 2006 1:42am
brilliant story cannot wait for the next update
KyuubiNaru posted a comment on Sunday 8th October 2006 4:18pm
wow, what a cliffy!! awesome! i love this story, really well written! please update, i can't wait for the next chappie!
Aquilara posted a comment on Saturday 7th October 2006 7:02am
Hello!
I started to read your story yesterday and I couldn't get away from it. It is really really great.
But you can't honestly tell me, that that is the end of this chapter?! It is simply not fair to leave us poor readers in the dark like that.
Well yes. I think I said I love your story and I really think the pairing is fantastic. I like it and yours is written good :)
Cheers
Aquilara
Muggleborn182 posted a comment on Friday 6th October 2006 12:07am
Only 2 words can describe that last move. Kick ass.
noylj posted a comment on Wednesday 4th October 2006 5:09pm
I was going to say after the last chapter that no chapter can be too long. These two together would just be adequate. The problem with being a good author is that you can not possibly update frequently enough unless you wait and post the whole story.
Claire_D posted a comment on Monday 2nd October 2006 5:22am
I like all the voting, and Harry's final coup :D
Adriana Lant posted a comment on Saturday 30th September 2006 3:03pm
I'm starting to slightly dislike Harry, as I've always liked Dumbledore. Though, this Harry does point out very true tidbits. Harry can't quit, 'cause then he'll never see Ginny! What did he do to the points system, and what did he tell McGonagall about? What bunnies? Great chapter. Keep writing!
Adriana Lant posted a comment on Saturday 30th September 2006 2:12pm
Poor Remus! Jeez, Harry burst, huh? I personally thought Tonks' joke was funny. No hidden meaning? My fingers just un-crossed themselves. What happened to her crush? I guess she just gave up. Mushrooms? Bunnies? Why does Ginny keep asking about the wooing? Is she hoping, 'cause I'll join! Tell Sally to feel better! Awesome Chapter (Harry yelling is pretty fun to read)! Keep writing!
Adriana Lant posted a comment on Saturday 30th September 2006 1:21pm
I was going to ask about Henry's name; that's very interesting. I hope it was a hint! The owls; ew! Very interesting, that Harry owns Knockturn Alley. Anyway, this chapter was great. Keep writing!
Otritzi posted a comment on Saturday 30th September 2006 11:15am
Nice dramatic finisher. I do so understand that Harry's reluctance to reveal his third vote is warrented, after all, he went to great lengths to hide the third ring, including glamors and other tricks. Although that line at the end was perfectly terrible..."'The House of Griffindor...'"
*Scoffs* Sounds like he's placing a vote as a spokesperson of the Griffindor house at Hogwarts.
Adriana Lant posted a comment on Saturday 30th September 2006 10:45am
Ginny and Harry in the next chapter, please! I'm crossing my fingers! I was reading Hermione's letter, thinking it was from Ron (because of Pig) and saying to myself, "this sounds like it's from Hermione..." Ron and Hermione, together? Yes! I loved this chapter. Keep writing!
Adriana Lant posted a comment on Saturday 30th September 2006 10:10am
So, who was it?!?! Poor Harry! I'd never be able to get through that, knowing I killed another human being, even if it was a Death Eater. Not many people can write combat very well, so it's a treat to read. Harry's letter and gift were very sweet! This was a very good chapter. Keep writing!
imakeeper posted a comment on Saturday 28th October 2006 12:41pm