freddie1 posted a comment on Thursday 17th November 2005 1:20pm

Wonderfully done, nicely paced story and i hope that it has a much better story line than HBP cause i nearly fainted after reading it ^^
Anyways, keep up the good work and greetings from me in malaysia.
cheers!

erin_colien posted a comment on Thursday 17th November 2005 6:03am

Nice update looking forward to the next.

Princess Fictoria posted a comment on Wednesday 16th November 2005 6:05am

Totally awesome story. I love the progression as well as the character development. I truly appreciate how Harry, though magically powerful and more mature than others of his age, still makes mistakes when venturing into unknown territory... such as politics. I hope that you will update this story soon as I can hardly wait to see peoples reactions to this trial... as well as the inevitable confrontation between Harry and Hermione.

slinky_jinx posted a comment on Tuesday 15th November 2005 7:40pm

Please update!

Rachael posted a comment on Tuesday 15th November 2005 2:37pm

Excellent chapter, and I have to admit, I found the part about Moony waking Harry up quite hilarious. I also enjoyed Harry trouncing Fudge's toady...wonderful!

Great job, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

patrik svensson posted a comment on Tuesday 15th November 2005 1:14am

grejt story,
keep upp the good work.

Opinions are like assholes.
Everyone has one - but some just smell worse than others.

Patches posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 7:43pm

Excellent. A masterful example of a witness being coached by informed councellors. It is nice to know Harry is being helped and protected.
Thanks for another great chapter! I love this story line.

ridmania posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 4:29pm

awesome loved it keep up the greta work and i cn;t wait to see harry's confrontation with hermione and see harry get even mmore powerful!!!

Manatheron posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 2:20pm

Very well done, and very well thought out. this is an excellent story, and I can't wait to see what happens next,

Please keep up the good work!

Steven Augart posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 2:07pm

A good chapter. It leaves me wondering what Dewey was trying for, really, and what was really motivating him.

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 9:32am

Dewey's *fishing expedition* catches nothing (except trouble for Dewey). What I personally find odd is that Harry Potter (a prosecution witness) seems to have been the one on trial (not the nine Nibblers in manacles and chains); and Dewey is working for the *Ministry*?

Musings of Apathy posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 6:22am

Good chapter. Does Voldemort want Dewey to get Harry to reveal his location or does Fudge (ie who is really behind it?)?

Mike.

Hagrid posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 6:07am

Having read past events of Wizengamot procedures, I do not find you taking any more liberties than the Wizengamott does. If they were doing their jobs properly, wouldn't Fudge be seated in the chain-chair?

Machiavelli Jr posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 5:46am

We can quite comfortably assume that everyday procedure looks nothing like Fudge's archaic Harry Intimidation Special. Kinda like comparing a County Court [whatever the US equivalent is, Federal Circuit I guess] trial to Judge Jeffreys. The Lexicon has a couple of screwups in it anyway so altering minor details is no problem - JKR is as likely to prove you right as not. Top chapter, loved Harry's backchat. KUTGW.

jmcqk6 posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 5:39am

like how you handled the trial. good work! thanks for the update!

Jeconais posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 5:10am

Nice part chris, some fun semantics in the court, and of course, I am now wondering about the staus of Mr Decimal System's forearm.

Of course, he could just be a lawyer... is there even a difference?

jmcqk6 posted a comment on Thursday 10th November 2005 5:07pm

Great work here. I'm really enjoying this story. I like the pairing, too. This is one of the few stories i've read with harry as gryffindore's heir that is actually, well, good! I like filius and mcgonagall's attitudes.

What happened in the chamber? I would have like to see at least a bit of that scene.

Very interesting twist with the letter at the end. I can see this blowing up very easily. does bones know about this?

Anyways, looking forward to an update soon. until then, so long, do well, win awards, and thanks for all the fish. see you in the funny papers.

Halatia posted a comment on Wednesday 9th November 2005 9:55am

Evil cliffie! Evil! Now you'll have to update again right away so I don't die of a heart attack I'll have if I'm kept in suspense too long!

Hal

Rex posted a comment on Tuesday 8th November 2005 12:29pm

How about a little humilation for the ferret the brown nosing bookworm and the hot head jealous weasel(ron) as a not so stuble revenge

patrik svensson posted a comment on Tuesday 8th November 2005 7:00am

grejt story,
keep upp the good work.

Opinions are like assholes.
Everyone has one - but some just smell worse than others.