By Crys
Reviews
Shayne Rich posted a comment on Thursday 19th July 2007 6:01am
Great story and final chapter. I have followed this story for just over a year now. It has been a grand tale and wonderful fun.
Thanks for sharing.
Shayne
Jim_xinu posted a comment on Thursday 19th July 2007 5:25am
*Not* giving Snape a good cursing is a nice change. :-)
Good story, thanks for sharing it with us.
morriganscrow posted a comment on Thursday 19th July 2007 5:19am
A lovely and appropriate ending.
Snape got exactly what he deserved - nothing.
I also loved what you did with careers. That was the first time I've seen Nev become Minister.
The last couple of lines were perfect.
Thanks so much for all your hard work on this wonderful story. I loved it.
infinity2x0 posted a comment on Thursday 19th July 2007 5:10am
A delicious ending, thank you for writing. Though what you lack in fine tuning and polish, you have made up for in abundance with excellent instinct and skill. I personally look forward to your next great en devour.
delta16669 posted a comment on Thursday 19th July 2007 5:07am
You know... I kinda thought that Harry would live for a lot longer. He's Harry fuckin Potter so I figured that he would outlive most of his friends and then just walk off into the sunset or something. But still - that was awesome. Good job!
Wolfric posted a comment on Thursday 19th July 2007 4:55am
I have thoroughly enjoyed your fine story. I look forward to future efforts as you are inspired to create them. Thank you for writing. W.
Claire_D posted a comment on Thursday 19th July 2007 4:40am
Wonderful ending. I'm glad you're happy with it in the end, WIPs are hard work, espeically fics of this length but as I reader have I enjoyed it emensely.
Enjoy DH.
Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Thursday 19th July 2007 4:18am
Well, an incredible and well-written work overall, and really enjoyed the way that things played out here. Snape got to go out wiht a pop, instead of a bang, and Harry and Nim were able to have a great happy ending, along with everyone else. A great story!
Ken Warner posted a comment on Thursday 19th July 2007 4:16am
this was a very enjoyable adventure to read, and one that I am sure that i will pull out many times in the future to re-read. had you not mentioned them i doubt that i would notice any of the "problems' listed.
thanks so much for sharing your talents
warmest regards
Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Thursday 19th July 2007 4:04am
Excellent finish to a fine story. Nicely wrapped up epilog. I love the fact that Snape is basically ignored - a much more insulting ending than being beaten in a duel by the man who killed the greatest dark lord in a long time.
Thank you for writing this. Very enjoyable! Good luck on any future stories.
Tom A.
(So I was wrong about it being snape who found him in the last chapter. So it goes.)
Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Thursday 19th July 2007 3:39am
Crys -
A great ending for a great story. I value clever and unique, and you've delivered in spades.
I could have NEVER let Snape go without having Harry duel him. If for no other reason this was brilliant. However, this chapter and all of them were distinctive. No Harry as Minister or Headmaster - I buy the paperwork factors easily dissuading him from going for Head.
Sad to see its end, but CONGRATULATIONS!
Anniejay posted a comment on Thursday 19th July 2007 3:22am
thank you for the pleasure your 2 years of hard work has given me
Patricia Lee Finley posted a comment on Thursday 19th July 2007 2:51am
Ah, the 'ol happily everafter retuine. With the new and final book coming out, we can just hope that the same will happen for JK's Harry, though I seriously doubt it.
I've really enjoyed this story and hope that you continue creating more quailty stories.
_Moony_ posted a comment on Thursday 19th July 2007 2:31am
Bravo, fantastic story!
c3markh posted a comment on Thursday 19th July 2007 2:30am
Loved the story and have followed it from the beginning. Sorry to see it end. Thanks fir writing.
Alex00 posted a comment on Thursday 19th July 2007 2:23am
Great story.
Orion posted a comment on Thursday 19th July 2007 2:01am
Great story. I've been folowing it since it was just a few chapters long.
Overall, i've really enjoyed it.
As for your "what i might have done differently" - I think that it's Cliche to have the principle relationship involved in a BIG fight. There is no need for it and while little fights now and then are realistic, the big fight is overused, unrealistic, and often needless unless you want to torture the characters.
Griever posted a comment on Thursday 19th July 2007 1:48am
Nice one, Crys. Thank you for a job well done.
I may not be particularly in favor of the sort of 'where did they end up' epilogue, but that's about the only thing about the story I'd have rather seen done differently or not at all. Personal preference, though.
I _loved_ the ending bit where Harry just ignores and dismisses Snape as unimportant. Very fitting.
Generally speaking? A good, encompassing, and enjoyable read. I'm looking forward to seeing what you come up with next, and hope that this project hasn't burned you out for following ones of similar scope and volume.
-Griever
DrT posted a comment on Thursday 19th July 2007 1:25am
Thanks for a fun story.
"T"
Highschool Nerd posted a comment on Thursday 19th July 2007 6:03am