By Crys
Reviews
Finbar posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 12:57pm
WOOOOO!! Dementory Goodness! Yay for Soul Sucking demons from beyond the pale! (who arent Slytherin 5th years with a predeliction for vamp like activities and a certain 'reputation')
Great chapter. I'm surprised Harry didnt make any more slightly grissly threats to Kevin, "Just so you know, I've been experimenting on combining hexes. If you hurt her, in any way, I've got a combination of explosion curse and circumcision charm with your name on it."
Great fun
Cheers
Finbar
Crys replied:
*wince*
I thought about Harry being a bit more . . . forceful in his threats, but one of my betas pointed out that he who's survived multiple deadly duels and has unwilling killed wouldn't make such a threat lightly.
'Sides, the "Explosive Castration Hex" has already been done in a fic. Don't remember which one, but it was a re-do. Harry was showing this hex he'd learned to Ron on the Hogwarts Express. Scabbers was old anyway . . .
jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 12:55pm
OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! Them stupid and pesky Dementoids strike again. When will they ever learn that picking a day when Harry is there is like robbing a bank with Superman in the bank. I can't wait to see what happens next. DO keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)
morriganscrow posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 12:39pm
Oh noes! A cliffy! Cute chapter, bring on the action!
matthiasblack posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 11:45am
Ooh, an attach is looming. Well I hope it is as good as the rest of your fic. Thank you for this chapter and I hope to see more soon.
The Midnight Poster posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 11:44am
"Suddenly too cold." WoW! For the first time I know what's comeing!
A cold snap is moving in?
Musings of Apathy posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 11:37am
Ah...dementors, what would a Hogwarts game be without them, especially when Remus is there with Harry. Just like old times.
The first scene was a bit confusing, what with them at the train platform and then suddenly looking at a jewelry shop without walking there, but I can understand not telling us every move they are making. You could have remedied it by having them immediately start on a leisurely walk to and through the town of Hogsmead. Your choice, it just seemed to make it a bit under-described as it is.
Thanks for writing.
Mike (MoA)
Life's a Dance posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 11:21am
Waiting eagerly for the next chapter due to that cliffie...Dare I guess Dementors? Evil! Evil! Evil! Bad! Ok. I'm done with my Turette's Syndrome outburst. Seriously though...Update soon please?
DrT posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 11:09am
Nice chapter. Poor Kevin, but he seemed to stand up well. We'll see how eh likes dementors.
"T"
Greg Johnson posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 11:00am
Another great chapter. Can't wait for the next one. Keep up the good work.
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 10:36am
Very good.
gunny
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 10:10am
Good one.
gunny
Prince Charon posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 10:00am
Interesting. You're very good at this.
Thank you for the update.
More soon, please.
AcceleratedGlass posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 9:15am
good chapter update soon
Brad1 posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 8:09am
damn cliffie's! i hate them you hopefully will have the next chapter out soon as this was one great chapter putting the human side out for harry! keep up the awesome writing!
Amamama posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 8:08am
Nice visit to Hogwarts, but then the dementors came? Ouch. Teasing Hermione and kevin was fun, though.
Thanks!
Berte
HermioneGreen posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 8:05am
Awesome! I look forward to seeing what Harry does with the jewlery. Keep up the good work.
Thanks for sharing
'Mione
Kinsfire posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 7:56am
...and you will now announce a six-month sabbatical to Peru after this cliffhanger...*laugh*
I like it, and thought that conversation in the stands was absolutely perfect. (And I'm betting that Kevin is smart enough to realise that, as much as it came across as a joke, Harry was serious about if Kevin hurts her.)
DJ posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 7:19am
YA know why did you have to leave it there LOL? Thnks for all the work and I hope you update soon.
john2 posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 6:47am
Discreet and Discrete are two different words that are not interchangeable. If I'm looking for something that's not too loud, it's discreet.
Quidditch is capitalized too.
Thus concludes your beta scolding.
J
Crys replied:
Discreet/Discrete: You are correct, sir. Fixed.
On the second one . . . Well, JKR capitalizes it, true. But here in the States, do we capitalize baseball, football, pitcher, quarterback, etc? Or in the UK do they capitalize football and midfielder and goalie? Yet JKR capitalizes Quidditch, Seeker, Keeper, and Snitch.
Much as I love the world JKR has created, I disagree with some of the writing rules she uses.
CRose posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 1:13pm