By Crys
Reviews
MarkH posted a comment on Thursday 6th July 2006 1:29pm
Awww, you had to kill poor Draco (snicker, snicker). I don't feel sorry for him, but I do feel bad for his mother.
Loved the Headmaster's Office scene.
More more more.
pstibbons posted a comment on Monday 3rd July 2006 4:11pm
I will nominate this fic for the Best Use of a Butterknife in Fanfiction award.
Crys replied:
Though it's a little-known category, I'd be delighted to be nominated. Thank you :)
pstibbons posted a comment on Monday 3rd July 2006 3:44pm
The interaction between the bodyguards is amusing. Especially Kingsley's hair. That was close to inspired.
I'm not fond of Manipulative Dumbledore fics, but when a story is funny, such non-canonities are ignorable.
Manatheron posted a comment on Friday 30th June 2006 10:48am
Excellent! Love the portrayal of hogwarts, it's interesting that she (he?) is taking such an active role in discipline. I do hope that harry isn't going to rush into battle himself, really, he is far to valuable a player to risk. It'd be like Sacrificing the queen to save a bishop in chess, Yes a bishop is valuable, but the queen is much MUCH more so.
ScoobyAngel posted a comment on Wednesday 28th June 2006 7:09pm
I have enjoyed your fan fic and hope to see another update soon.
Prongsie posted a comment on Tuesday 27th June 2006 8:44pm
Maybe some bunnies for the rest of the story:
having Ron lash out on Ginny for 'not grabbing her chance at Harry when she could' and him having to spend at least 3 hours floating above the lake at Hogwarts with the Giant Squid lurking underneath. Of course, someone feeds the Squid from time to time, but Ron doesn't need to know that, now does he? Another bunny: Draco who (in complete selfdefence, of course) uses some stuff from WWW (cute bunnies that explode when they sense perverts near them?) and refuses to admit it afterwards.
Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter!
Crys replied:
Couple interesting bunnies.
Unfortunately, neither will be all that possible to include after chapter 35.
Sorry, but thanks for the ideas.
Dharshiga posted a comment on Tuesday 27th June 2006 3:08pm
Hi,
I just finished reading your entire story in one sitting no less and I must say I love it. This is my first Harry/Tonks fic since it's not a pairing I read often. I like the Potter-Black aristocratic story line. Its quite interesting with all the other characters and their lives mentioned. I'm curious to see if Draco will survive the attack. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Great job with the story. Please update soon.
~Lady Eliza
tom posted a comment on Tuesday 27th June 2006 1:16pm
Good story so far -- thought Snape was the Dark Arts Defense prof this year rather than potions master, and think this sentence has an extra word or two: " He almost wished she could have worked in how Fudge was taking trying (ineptly) to take political and security advice from an underage wizard."
need this book to finish so that I can resume normal life. :)
Crys replied:
He is. Text changed about the potions cabinet.
And you were right, there was an extra word in that sentence. That text also changed. Thank you, twice :)
Dragen posted a comment on Monday 26th June 2006 1:05am
Very good story so far, I love the story so much... I can't wait to see what happens to Harry and Nim... keep up the good work.
Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Monday 26th June 2006 12:00am
Just excellent 'subtle' attack on Fudge. No author can make him look too bad in my book.
Can't wait for the answer to the cliffie you've created here.
Fine work!
Janeth posted a comment on Sunday 25th June 2006 2:37pm
I hate cliffhangers...
HyperGreenLlama posted a comment on Sunday 25th June 2006 2:32pm
Ahh Cliffhanger. I like it. I can't wait for new chapters. :D Great work.
Prince Charon posted a comment on Sunday 25th June 2006 3:27am
Good part, interesting cliffhanger.
More soon, please.
Jadzia posted a comment on Saturday 24th June 2006 7:26pm
I just wanted to say that I'm slowly making my way through all your stories, and I love each and every one of 'em. You have a gift for detail that isn't dull, and your characterizations are lovely to read. Your plots are inventive, and the parts that are, of necessity, not so inventive, are still riveting. Keep up the good work. I passed your site on to my daughter, too. She's fourteen and everything I've read so far is appropriate for her to read, so thanks for that, as well.
Crys replied:
Glad you're enjoying it all.
I try to be honest in my ratings (or perhaps leaning toward conservative). Nice to know one of the reader-parents out there agrees with me.
For our younger readers, the NSNS section (no smut, no slash) has four authors in it who are all quite good. Hit the "other authors" link just below my banner and at the bottom of that page is the listing of the NSNS authors.
Anaknisatanas posted a comment on Saturday 24th June 2006 5:10pm
Oh geez, that's such an evil place to end the chapter! :P
Seriously though, I'm going to be sitting here until the next update wondering what's going to happen to Draco. And I'm very curious how Fudge is going to take Harry's little letter to the editor. hehe. I really like that Cissy and Andy are helping Harry out, very smart. I just love this story and the nickname for Tonks is great and very sweet. I can't wait until your next update.
Will Lucius be attacking? What about Tom in the pub? Any customers? Harry should think about giving Draco a portkey and brings him to the Tonks' house or something.
Crys replied:
Afraid you'll have to wait until the next chapter to get the answers to all of those questions.
Shadow High Angel posted a comment on Saturday 24th June 2006 9:42am
Another great chapter, loved the letter to the editor, can't wait for more.
Steve Stephan posted a comment on Saturday 24th June 2006 1:19am
Please continue. This was a rather short chapter and I look forward to you continuing this story, eagerly.
Patches posted a comment on Friday 23rd June 2006 6:17pm
A really good chapter. I like the way Harry dealt with Fudge and his "quote of the BWL"! After Sirius death and the fact that he was imprisoned without a trial there is no way Harry
would allow someone to be executed without a prior conviction and an interogation to back up the act. Thank you for writing. This is really good. pms
MichelleG posted a comment on Friday 23rd June 2006 2:43pm
Another good chapter. I love this story. Can't wait for more.
Treck posted a comment on Thursday 6th July 2006 1:44pm