vertru posted a comment on Friday 3rd July 2009 5:57am

Great job on this, Crys. I do hope you intend to carry on with it, as it has promise of being one of your better efforts. I look forward to seeing more.

Crys replied:

I most definitely intend to carry on.   More chapters already written, just need some polishing before they get posted.

James Barber posted a comment on Friday 3rd July 2009 5:55am

Hey it might look bad, cause most of the world is going to look at it just like ron does, but hey he's honorable enough to treat them as regular wifes and like I always say fuck everybody else, its my life it aint none of their fucking business what I do, as long as it doesnt interfere with theirs! right! so same with him I reckon! anyway he's saving them from a fate worse than death!

DarQuing posted a comment on Friday 3rd July 2009 5:33am

I like it. I hope you plan on writing more about it. :)

Crys replied:

Definitely.   Many more chapters in the works.

Galadrion posted a comment on Friday 3rd July 2009 5:18am

Glad to see that this one's not a one-shot; there's just too many unresolved important issues in the air at this point. That being said, I'd have probably reworked that ending a bit; the exchange with Neville at the end just feels superfluous. Unless it's an important plot lead-in, I'd consider cutting it and letting this chapter ease out on the humor of Ron's observations. (If it IS an important lead-in, I'd SERIOUSLY consider moving it back up to the previous exchange with Neville, where he said "They're your chattel?" It feels more natural there, though you'd have to have Seamus strong-arm the conversation back around to his quip.)

Sarah5 posted a comment on Friday 3rd July 2009 5:06am

Very Good story I hope you write more will Harry get a harem?

Crys replied:

As I believe that the definition of "harem" is that he has more than one wife, then yes.   Tracey and Daphne (at least).

Thanks for reading.

Wolfric posted a comment on Friday 3rd July 2009 5:00am

Great story. I think there will be many oppertunities for humor, action and intregue. Harry needs some good Slytherin advisors. Since its going to be public knowledge anyway , Harry and company should use the situation to make Lucius and others look bad instead of Harry. What would have Harry's forfeit have been if he had lost the duel? Thanks for writing. W.

Crys replied:

There will be humor, action and intrigue.   I just hope it'll be GOOD humor, action, and intrigue.

And Ferret Jr screwed up.   He didn't have to accept Harry's duel, but he did.   He should've named Harry's "wager", but he didn't.   The Malfoy arrogance strikes again.

Michael10 posted a comment on Friday 3rd July 2009 4:46am

Interesting story. Eagerly await to see what happens next.
Seer voice: "I see a great argument between the raven haired hero and a certain Weasley Matriarch"

Keep up the good work as always and post more of this soon...please.

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Friday 3rd July 2009 4:37am

Great start, thanks.

Jason Karr posted a comment on Friday 3rd July 2009 4:23am

I am wondering how Ron's mother is going to take this news of Harry marrying these two girls.

Regina Noctis posted a comment on Friday 3rd July 2009 3:52am

Ha, just realized it wasn't a one-shot. WHEW!! XD

Regina Noctis posted a comment on Friday 3rd July 2009 3:52am

Somehow, I wish it ended differently, but I can't say I know how :/ Maybe a description of the wedding, in a humorous fashion or something, where Harry's completely losing his mind over the pureblood customs and such? >.>

Nice plot bunny though. Wish it could go on for longer!

Crys replied:

Oh, it most definitely WILL go on for longer.

Thanks for reading.

tomandeva posted a comment on Friday 3rd July 2009 3:47am

What an excellent chapter. While you could stop here, I do hope that you won't.

One minor quibble: "you dragged me in here", not "you drug me in here".

Crys replied:

Nope, that's not the end.

Cameron posted a comment on Friday 3rd July 2009 3:42am

Please continue this. I always enjoy reading fiction by everyone on this site, and this is no exception.

Crys replied:

Definitely more chapters coming.

Thanks for reading.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Friday 3rd July 2009 3:16am

*chuckle* Quite a good story so far, though it does beg for a follow-up or two as things owrk out; Harry treating Dpahne and tracey properly, despite them unavoidably being chattel should raise a few eyebrows and make some people think. Meanwhile, the responses from the Dark families affected should be rather interesting, too, and it would be interesting to see just why Albus trusts Severus so much.

Crys replied:

There are several more chapters coming.

Oh, and Malfoy's response will definitely be part of the story.

Dakaath@TTH posted a comment on Friday 3rd July 2009 2:09am

i like the details you added. Love to see what the Wizarding World's reaction will be.

sparrowphoenix posted a comment on Friday 3rd July 2009 1:57am

I hope that there is more to come.

This is a wonderful story. And since when did Harry ever truly care what everyone else thought about him.

Keep up the wonderful work!

Crys replied:

There is more coming.

Harry doesn't care much what everyone thinks.   They're telling him things they think he should know, not that he necessarily asked.

Thanks for reading.

Gardengirl posted a comment on Friday 3rd July 2009 1:41am

An interesting place to leave off. This was a great read, and it howls for continuation! Thanks for posting.

Crys replied:

By no means is this finished.   More chapters coming.

t_gebhardt posted a comment on Friday 3rd July 2009 1:02am

... good piece of work. Hope you it is not a one shot.

Crys replied:

Nope, it's not a one-shot.   More chapters coming.