William Martin posted a comment on Monday 6th July 2009 8:23pm

Quite interesting so far. An accidental, arranged marraige... wow! I thought Tracey was a first or second year. Maybe that's from another story. It would be even weirder if Harry was forced to marry an 11 or 12 year old.
At least they are away from Malfoy!

Poirot posted a comment on Monday 6th July 2009 5:13am

Great chapter! I love the concept, and the writing is well done.

defiant1981 posted a comment on Monday 6th July 2009 4:33am

Like the way the story is been set up. Iam very curious to see if there will be weasley bashing? Always hoping or more dumbledore bashing.

Hagrid posted a comment on Monday 6th July 2009 4:17am

I got som'att ter ask yeh, Just how much sleep der yeh think our 'Arry's gonna get ternight? Pool lad will be tossin' and turnin' faster than a niffler in a sack of galleons. Tis enough ter even keep me awake, wonderin' how he's got 'imself inter this one. An them pure-bloods call me a savage? A great job on yer part, no questions there.

Crys replied:

Thanks, Hagrid.

Poor Harry will be having a few sleep-deprived nights, but he'll survive it.

Oh, and Hagrid?   Tether a thestral for Harry and his girls, would you?   They'll need to borrow a coach after the wedding.   Thanks.

Jamie46 posted a comment on Monday 6th July 2009 3:38am

Niiiiiice. Really, I liked it a lot. I went back to read the original bunny before starting yours, and I saw some of the initial changes. I like how you expanded on it, etc... and also how you made it so you could go into multiple chapters. :) Great stuff. Thanks for sharing!

Ken Warner posted a comment on Sunday 5th July 2009 11:46pm

quite enjoyable, I am looking forward to the eruption of Mount Hermione that once and for all clears the rubble of filthy-minded Ron ness away from Harry and his trio or quad of excellent wives/consorts. After that ball and chain has been removed from his metaphorical feet he should be able to fairly quickly eliminate the 2 dark lards and move to a relatively free society.

thanks for sharing

Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Sunday 5th July 2009 8:54pm

Loved the way this has started out here, and really hope to see more of it later on. Now, I have to say that this Albus is very dissappointing, and is at the full power of blaming the light while trying to maneuver the dark back to that same light. That he was willing to let the girls be given away shows that he's so out of touch with reality that he needs to be taken care of by retirement at the very least. I also feel for Harry and the girls as well, and can imagine the headlines in the Prophet if Neville points it out, and will be curious as to whether any professor will help him this time, or simply let the rest of wizarding Britain take potshots at him like before in the canon. Can't wait to see more of this AU and what all will happen, especially if Ginny pitches a fit, which will have large Molly doing the same.

Logan_MacLeod posted a comment on Sunday 5th July 2009 1:17pm

This was awesome!!!!
I hope you have plans to continue the story

Crys replied:

Yep, more coming.

Glad you're enjoying it.

Zaxxon posted a comment on Sunday 5th July 2009 10:54am

Interesting...

I do hope this is but chapter/part 1 of a longer story.

Crys replied:

Yep, more coming.

Glad you're enjoying it.

mwinter posted a comment on Sunday 5th July 2009 9:33am

Good start! keep it coming.

Vilkath posted a comment on Sunday 5th July 2009 7:43am

Eh not bad, though sort disapointed how much everyone points out obvious things but does nothing about it. Like Dumbledore, oh he's bad evil and in bed with Snape.. okay move on and ignore it from there.

Plus why should Harry care what others think about the Chatel thing? The school, and wizarding world has loved/hated him almost all his life and nothing he does ever changes matters. If his 'friends' like Ron are acting like that really has no hope changing rest schools mind.

Over all it's a nice start I hope to see continued, it has a few additions and changes from the orginal plot but I truely think future chapters could define this story. Though I do wonder about it some how being 7th year in name.. but acting like 5th, 6th, etc year never happend. Dumbledore is alive, draco in school voldemort still a name people talk about etc.

Crys replied:

Harry doesn't necessarily care what everyone thinks.   Nev and everyone are telling him what they think he should know.   He didn't ask.

AU after 5th year canon.   6th year was quiet, nothing of note happened.

Glad you're enjoying it.

abandonedprofile1 posted a comment on Sunday 5th July 2009 7:29am

Wow. Promising start...(or is this just a oneshot?) Liked the duel :)

Crys replied:

More coming.   Not a one-shot.

Glad you're enjoying it.

hpfirecracker posted a comment on Sunday 5th July 2009 7:26am

A very good start. I just hope Neville is wrong, but I know better. Glad Tracey and Daphene are willing to teach Harry the ins and outs of Pure blood society. Wonder what trouble Dumbledore will cause. Glad to see Flitwick and McGonagale on Harry side. Well written. Thank you for sharing

Pointer posted a comment on Saturday 4th July 2009 9:53pm

Definitely lose points on the social scale for owning slaves...even if its legal.

What would have happened if a girl, say Hermione had challenged and kicked Malfoy's butt?

Crys replied:

Why, then she'd get the chattel.   Everyone keeps calling it a wedding, but it's going to be more of a ceremony to transfer the girls from "people" to "property of Harry".

marcelhm posted a comment on Saturday 4th July 2009 9:17pm

well I'm a big rorsch fan so I knew the original, can only say, like the twist you brought to it and really enjoyed it, curious about your plans on taking this further (well at least I hope you plan on taking it further.. or is it farther)

Crys replied:

Definitely going to be more chapters.   No worries on that.

Thank you for reading.

noylj posted a comment on Saturday 4th July 2009 8:31pm

More would be nice. Story needs to continue and Malfoys and Snapes, at least, need to die or at least lose all honor and respect.

Crys replied:

Your wish is my command.

Well, not really, but more chapters will be coming and Malfoys and Snape will definitely be . . . addressed.

Manatheron posted a comment on Saturday 4th July 2009 5:04pm

-whistles-

Nice. very nice even.

I found your explaination of the girls thinking to be understandable, and they themselves to be quite in character. The harry and flitwick bystory was certainly believable, as was Malfoy's abuse of trust. Dumbledor's 'second chances' thing was a bit overplayed however.

I can't help but notice however that the girls have not in fact gotten out of anything. Neither Vincent nor Gregory actually named Draco their champion, nor did either of them agree to the duel in the first place, or rather if they did, you forgot to mention it. Or did draco already duel them for the girls privately?

-Shrugs-

Nitpicking I know, but if you Intend to continue the story (Please!)it's something to keep in mind.

Crys replied:

Crabbe and Goyle didn't object when Draco named himself their champion, so they agreed to it.   The same thing almost occurred again when Snape nearly dueled Harry for the second time through (without Draco even being in the room during the initial stages).

Yes, the story will definitely continue.

Thanks for reading.

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Saturday 4th July 2009 4:24pm

Hmmm... Interesting. Is this going to be a long story or a shorter piece?

Good story so far, thanks for sharing it with us.

Crys replied:

This was just the first chapter.

Glad you're enjoying it.

warpwizard posted a comment on Saturday 4th July 2009 3:55pm

Decent setup, very standard. Might be interesting to see how it develops.

Carol Layland posted a comment on Saturday 4th July 2009 3:28pm

Hello Crys, Thank you for another interesting story.I have read most of your old postings and while I have not reviewed any of them I do believe that like most of the authors up on FanFic Authors, you are one of the very best and I am thrilled to see this new story taking shape. I eagerly await your nest installment of this story. Respectfully Carol