By Crys
Reviews
Mark4 posted a comment on Monday 16th January 2006 2:39am
I heard a rumor that you were attacked and seriously hurt by brains, Weasley. How ironic is that?Oh My God!! I sat there and laughed my butt off for 10 minutes after that line. Keep up the good work.
Treck posted a comment on Monday 16th January 2006 2:20am
Awww He loves me :p
Great chapter.
Finbar posted a comment on Monday 16th January 2006 1:50am
W00t!! *dances* Another bunny made it in!!
dwolc posted a comment on Monday 16th January 2006 1:37am
this is a cool chapter excpecually the ron part clearly writen the next chapter should have some inturlude with the three heads of houses and a meeting with dumbledore
AzureSky posted a comment on Monday 16th January 2006 1:25am
Nice one.
Jimbocous posted a comment on Saturday 14th January 2006 8:12pm
Thanks for a great update to a really good story.
Rex posted a comment on Friday 13th January 2006 12:36pm
Can you skin Snape alive and use him like a bear skin rug?
Ariyana posted a comment on Wednesday 11th January 2006 4:57pm
I truly liked the story all the way up to the part where you signified it followed HBP. I wish you would have reconsidered as many people were quite put out with the story. Personally I thought the idea of Hocruxes was blah and boring and Harry a weakling. Well you dealt with harry, but truly the Hocruxes are not really that good of a plot.
Good work though.
jinx66 posted a comment on Monday 9th January 2006 3:21pm
btw I have to thank you... My "physical" ex-girlfriend read this story not to long ago... Do I really need to further explain....again thanks
Lira posted a comment on Monday 9th January 2006 2:07am
Great story! Hope you'll update soon! :)
I don't usually like the Heir to the Founders stuff all too much but your story works well. Interesting how you make Harry/Tonks work. It's not a pairing that's automatically obvious. (Btw, I nearly didn't read your story as my first reaction to seeing H/T was, oh no, not Harry/Tom! I'm not very choosy about het or slash-pairings but there are one or two pairings such as Harry/Tom, Harry/Lucius that I absolutely don't want to see.)
I find your interaction between Dumbledore and Harry interesting and while I don't much like manipulative Dumbledore, in a lot of ways it makes more sense than how JKR wrote it in HBP with Harry being Dumbledore's man through and through. I'm really sorry about the way the relationship with Ron and Hermione turned out and hope that they'll both understand sooner or later and that the Trio can mend their friendship. They've stood with him through everything for five years, with the occasional fights sometimes making the friendship only stronger, it would be a pity for that friendship to be completely broken.
I also find your Narcissa interesting! And I like how you took some of the informations from HBP to weave into your story. Great work. Can't wait to read what's next.
(Oh, just one tiny thing that I spotted: when you first mentioned that meeting in Switzerland, you specified it was in Bern (unless I misread something) and in this chapter you said it was in Geneva.)
PhiloWorm posted a comment on Sunday 8th January 2006 10:04am
Hehehe genious I tell you, but political intrigues ain't realy much fun you know. Please get back to the T&T (Teaching & Teasing) soon k?
BJCKidsX4 posted a comment on Sunday 8th January 2006 7:04am
I'm usually more of a lurker then a reviewer, but I had to pop in to tell you how much I'm enjoying your story. I think Harry sounds like a little bit of a brat coming into his new status, but then again, he is just 16. I'd probably go hog-wild if I had been oppressed for that long, and then to be set loose. I'm all for Harry and Tonks dating. The guy that I have been with for almost 10 years is 5 1/2 years younger then me. 10 long years, and 2 beautiful children. Unfortunately, he can't stand HP, and so I use that knowledge whenever we argue-like calling him a muggle. His face turns an interesting shade of red.
Anyway, I hope you update again soon!
atlantis-rob posted a comment on Thursday 5th January 2006 12:43pm
Weee! The ball was great crys! I loved harry and nim's banter, and harry's annoyance between first dumbles then fudge was great. The chat with the elder families was excellent as was the follow up with Nevile and co! CheerS!
atlantis-rob posted a comment on Thursday 5th January 2006 12:38pm
Damn fine chapter Crys! Excellent job with the setup for the search, the hedges were truly inspired! And great job with harry and cissy's talk too. CheerS!
Patches posted a comment on Wednesday 4th January 2006 7:01pm
Very good. I like the way the story is unfolding. Thanks for writing. I look forward to your updates.
The Resident posted a comment on Wednesday 4th January 2006 12:23am
Nice chapter, full of all sorts of set-ups. Going to be interesting seeing how they develop. I'm really enjoying your story. Keep up the good work.
Jamie46 posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd January 2006 10:04pm
Great chapter! :) Lovely way to (sorta) ring in the New Year. :-D Not a whole lot "happened", per se, but I think it was a good chapter for keeping things flowing. Not all chapters can be chocked full of stuff. ;) Good job with this one. Looking forward to the next, at your leisure, of course ;) hahaha. Thanks for sharing!
brad posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd January 2006 4:57pm
Best news in this chapter: Hermione urged Dumbledore to invite Harry to the Hogwarts ball. Sorry, I know I've got a one-track mind, but I'd like to see her friends again with Harry. I still think Harry was too quick to dismiss her. But I'll be quiet now.
Interesting chapter, introducing a new facet of the wizarding world - business groupings, social occasions and Wizengamot structures. Looking forward to seeing all these come about in the story - Halloween ball, the werewolf legislation, etc. Thanks for the story thus far!
brad posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd January 2006 4:45pm
Nice to see some motherly sentiment from Narcissa for her one and only offspring; I had thought her abandoning him so quickly before was a bit unrealistic. She still seems cold to me, but I appreciate that some stuff is off camera.
"The entire past month has been surreal" - heh.
Glad to see the kiddie DEs caught out; this is a precaution which just makes good sense. And good fun to read about.
Aww, I want Harry to make up with his friends (particularly Hermoine). You're going to do it eventually, aren't you? Please?
DJ posted a comment on Monday 16th January 2006 3:16am