By Crys
Reviews
Manatheron posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd January 2006 2:18pm
Excellent couple of chapters, I'm sorry that I didn't get around to reviewing sooner, but the holidays have been just a tad bit hectic for me this year. I must admit that I am pleasently suprised at how well this scene was handled. It gives an interesting perspective into the inner workings of there business world.
Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd January 2006 12:31pm
A very nice read all around. I like the way several strands to the story are developing at their own pace.
Amit Patel posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd January 2006 7:09am
Very nice chapter, and I am really starting to wonder when you plan to give Snape a good old hexing
patrik svensson posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd January 2006 3:49am
Merry holidays.
Great story,
keep up the good work.
Opinions are like assholes.
Everyone has one - but some just smell worse than others.
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd January 2006 2:57am
Good chapter.
gunny
kittykatluver posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd January 2006 2:41am
Hm. Interesting. I like it!
EricThorsen posted a comment on Monday 2nd January 2006 6:50pm
That was just classic, especially Snape not being able to take points unfairly. Very original idea... good work all around.
Mickey posted a comment on Monday 2nd January 2006 6:31pm
Very nice chapter. One question, I thought Lucius Malfoy was in prison, not dead so how is his son "Baron Malfoy"? Or did I miss something?
Chris15 posted a comment on Monday 2nd January 2006 4:49pm
Great chapter.
Liked the display of back room politics.
The way everyone was sizing the newbie up was good too.
Liked Neville showing he is behind Harry. Can't wait for the two of them at the Wizengomott.
Liked the interaction between Nym and Harry, as Neville said they weren't acting like casual daters but people in a commited relationship.
Also liked the way you had Tonks figure out a work around for her clumsiness.
Needed more detail about Tonks appearance, which super model did she go as. What kind of dress or robes did they wear.
Think Harry and Tonks need to talk about his shyness in regards to her teasing soon.
Can't wait to see if Harry and Tonks will go to the Costume party and if so what they will go as.
Hoping by the time of the Yule party Harry will come to his senses and propose to Tonks.
What did Harry do to the points system?
Update soon.
Jarvey posted a comment on Monday 2nd January 2006 3:28pm
Great Chapter, keep up the good work.
DJ posted a comment on Monday 2nd January 2006 2:58pm
Good chapter I love the way Neville is used and Hannah its fun to see secondary characters step up; it is one of the big resons I love fan fic. Just wondering is Hermione going to get her head out of her a*s now that she is not with Ron? That is the one thing that has bin on my mind since you set it up she always has Harry's back, even when she thinks he is wrong she would still talk to him. Ron has bin kown to let hi ego get in the way but not Hermione Just my thoughts love the story.
Alex00 posted a comment on Monday 2nd January 2006 2:46pm
great chapter
Erin posted a comment on Monday 2nd January 2006 2:07pm
nice update looking forward to teh next.
Hagrid posted a comment on Monday 2nd January 2006 1:31pm
Casteratus? or some modified bat bogey hex perhaps? I wouldn't put either past Ginny. Yet another great chapter.
AzureSky posted a comment on Monday 2nd January 2006 12:56pm
Great chapter
shadowhc posted a comment on Monday 2nd January 2006 10:02am
great work .. ireally liked ur story..
Jarvey posted a comment on Saturday 31st December 2005 12:52pm
Great story, keep up the excellent work!
noylj posted a comment on Friday 30th December 2005 7:35pm
Harry/Tonks is OK and not a bombshell. The question is, is your Ginny over Harry or can we maybe haveH/T/G?
Also, are we EVER going to fight more DEs??
noylj posted a comment on Friday 30th December 2005 7:19pm
How do you have a slippery slope with a law that explicitely calls for summary execution of previously convicted death eaters? Are there good death eaters that shouldn't be executed? To me, the proposed legislation is so far from a slippery slope as to count as no more than level field. Should be "any convicted Death Eater."
haydenelrics posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd January 2006 4:45pm