Robin Westerly posted a comment on Saturday 26th November 2005 1:57pm

Yippee!!
Some one else thought of that! I always wanted an metamorphmagus Harry, but I lack the skills to bring him to life. Thank you, thank you, thank you!
One question. Maybe I am being dim but why did they visit the chamber of secrets earlier. Is it because Harry wants to check the facts for his story to the prophet? Though that seems unlikely.
Confused...
Still, I love this fic!
Especially Godric, so again thank you

Meghan posted a comment on Thursday 24th November 2005 11:23am

Another lovely chapter! I can't wait to see where this goes-- more soon and quickly, very quickly! :D Happy Thanksgiving too if you celebrate it.

slashslut posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd November 2005 1:32am

i really, *really* like this story! it's very well-written (which is a rarity!) and engaging.
i'm glad that this is harry/tonks and not harry/ginny as most het pairings seem to put those two together. i dont have anything against it but tonks deserves more scene time:)
see you next chapter! update soon.

Jamie46 posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd November 2005 3:21pm

Harry rolled his eyes. "Call me Harry, please. This 'Lord Potter' thing makes me think someone important is standing behind me."

Henry, still perched on Harry's chair back, hooted.


HAHAHAHHAAH :) Oh god, I totally laughed out loud, big belly chuckles...which made my computer bounce ;) lol.... :) hahahaha, thanks. that was great.

Knight_Hax0r posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd November 2005 2:36pm

Other than Harry and Tonks being together and Remus perfering his own gender, you have an excellent story here! Though I must point out that there is a lot of slandar for one Hogwarts Headmaster, and while i whole heartily agree that he is a manipulative arsehole, Ive seen only a couple of stories that looked upon him in favour. He did die in Rowling's Half-blood Prince, so you would think that some sympathy, albiet undeserved, would go to him!?!?? (>.

brad posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd November 2005 12:05pm

Pleasant chapter. No earth-shattering action sequences or surprices, but some good substance that fleshes out Harry's current life. Tonks' observations on Harry's duelling weaknesses were interesting, as were her comments on morphing (I think I've read the centre-of-mass theory elsewhere, maybe on Jeconais's group - or did you cover it in The Unknown Power?).

I liked Harry's desire to see the 'real' Tonks - something you did cover in The Unknown Power, I think. Always a nice touch though.

Thanks for the chapter!

Ken Warner posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd November 2005 7:29am

Good chapter - did enjoy your putting in the limitations aspects, although most HP fic seem to put them in only so Harry can blow huge holes through them. Hope that Harry and Tonks get to snog a little soon.
Thanks

Terry Swain posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd November 2005 4:05am

great story. looking forward to more of it.

cmzanna posted a comment on Monday 21st November 2005 3:12pm

Crys, this flows sweetly and all too fast... I'm trying very hard to resist begging for more :) can't wait to see what happens next!

Musings of Apathy posted a comment on Monday 21st November 2005 1:01pm

Someday Harry will think about the soft tissue issue and be caught in an embarrassing situation changing some of his...features. It is bad enough when someone walks in on a teen wanking, but if he were experimenting with length and breadth it would be simply mortifying.

Great story. I eagerly await the next.

Mike.

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Monday 21st November 2005 12:49pm

Poor Harry! This actually runs right into Kelly's issue of How Does The BWL Have A PRIVATE Social Life. Harry needs privacy simply *because* he's Harry, and Tonks needs one as his girlfriend. However, three Rather Large Issues get in the way:

1. He's her patriarch. (Never mind that she's older than he is, and ALSO never mind that the patriarch bedding the hired help has a history in wizarding Britain MUCH longer than in Muggle Britain; Appearance Is Everything!)

2. He's the closest thing to wizarding royalty that exists. As simply the Boy Who Lived, Harry Potter is an icon in wizarding Britain simply by kicking Tom's butt from his crib. Throw in that he's richer than almost all OTHER wizards (including those older by at least a century; offhand, I would say that only the Flamels come close), still single, and has been kicking DE butt on a semi-regular basis since age eleven, and you have a true wizarding ICON-PLUS. And he's only sixteen.

3. He's the third most powerful wizard or witch living. What Harry's done magically has ONLY been matched or exceeded by two other living wizards: Tom and Dumbledore. Godric has weighed in and plainly stated that he COULDN'T match Harry's capabilities. (And Harry is not through getting all his capabilities YET.) Power alone is a major attractant (albeit usually the WRONG sort of witch); however, Harry IS aware of it.The Prophet has attacked him numerous times BECAUSE of that power. Again; he's only sixteen. He will only be STRONGER (not weaker) at fifty-six (which isn't even middle-aged by the standards of wizarding Britain); MAYBE he'll START to grow weaker when he reaches Dumbledore's PRESENT age. (Then again, given how much Harry has rewritten the Magical Rulebook, he may wreck the expectations here too.)

mike bates posted a comment on Monday 21st November 2005 10:47am

this is a very nice chapter right here along with the rest of the story.....i'm glad you wrote this cause i read all the chapters including Chapter 20 and all i can say is that i'm addicted to these kind of stories :D

Prince Charon posted a comment on Monday 21st November 2005 10:14am

Nice. Very interesting.

jinx66 posted a comment on Monday 21st November 2005 7:40am

I started out with a real long review. I ended up deleting most of it....... All left I left is "very good chapter, good idea Remus had about date." Think you can help me set up a future date most of my girlfriends think that when I plan a date, the date sucks. lol don't answer that. lol

ridmania posted a comment on Monday 21st November 2005 7:34am

awesome loved it!!! love this story heaps!!! keep up the great work you bloody legend!!!! can't wai to see everyones reaction when they publish harry's article and i wonder what hes gonna treat hermione and ron like now? i hope crap they deserve it a bit!!!

dwolc posted a comment on Monday 21st November 2005 6:57am

this is a very good story i really like it

patrik svensson posted a comment on Monday 21st November 2005 6:13am

Great story,
keep upp the good work.

Opinions are like assholes.
Everyone has one - but some just smell worse than others.

Machiavelli Jr posted a comment on Monday 21st November 2005 5:27am

Theory good, metamorph detail good, Tonks' insecurity splendid - does she look like twin sister to Bella by any chance? Narcissa wouldn't be so bad. Merely plug-ugly is hardly enough to be that insecure over. I bet the old witch in Glasgow comes into things somewhere. Love to know what a really tough instructor would have to say about Harry's dodging habits - snarky Drill Sergeantese is fun. Can Moody come back into things doing his full CONSTANT VIGILANCE in-my-day-you'd-have-died-last-week... routine? KUTGW

Finbar posted a comment on Monday 21st November 2005 2:13am

Yeah, the 3rd eye would be fun, but more realisticly, is altering the fingers and fingernails into retractable cat-claws with snake-venom sacs.....then a nictating membrane over the eyes so you dont have to blink:)

They call me ... Goofball posted a comment on Friday 18th November 2005 11:28am

I love it!! update soon so we can all have our lifes lightened by this fic. =] I just wish there were more harry/tonks fictions out there in the world that actually have a plot and get finished. Meh cant have everything now can we. Any ideas for fics of harry/tonks would be greatly appreciated if you have any recommendations.