By Crys
Reviews
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Saturday 10th December 2005 7:42am
Outstanding, looks like Fudge is about to get his....lol.
gunny
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Saturday 10th December 2005 4:41am
Fudge is such a git, needs to be replaced.
gunny
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Saturday 10th December 2005 4:16am
Very good, although I hate it that Susan is dead. Always liked her.
gunny
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Saturday 10th December 2005 3:48am
Good story.
gunny
Kevin Hendricks posted a comment on Saturday 10th December 2005 3:19am
Just wanted to say "love it". I have always disliked how Molly babies everyone too much. Your story is the first that I have ever seen that Harry reacts in any way to what Molly does.
Thanks for writing/sharing your story.
Kevin
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2005 8:27pm
Good one but I think too much is made of killing in self defence. They drserve what they get.
gunny
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2005 8:08pm
Very good.
gunny
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2005 7:35pm
Very good, love the fun stuff, makes the story better.
gunny
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2005 7:14pm
Good one.
gunny
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2005 6:50pm
Nice, liking this more and more.
gunny
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2005 6:28pm
Good one.
gunny
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2005 6:13pm
Very good, got to love Tonks and Kingsley.
gunny
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2005 5:54pm
Very good.
gunny
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2005 5:36pm
Very good, I think I will enjoy reading this story.
gunny
kittykatluver posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2005 4:54pm
Could you include the words "rutabaga" and "spleen" in the next chappie? Just for moi? (Blinks innocently) Pwease?
Anyway, I LOVE IT!!
Chris15 posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2005 2:45pm
Loved your portrayel of Narcissa.
Liked how Andy found out about her daughter and Harry. Think it's about time for a mother/daughter chat.
Like the way the Black family seems to be coming together.
I hope Narcissa can convinse Harry to host a social event. For some reason the idea of him hiring the twins to help with decorations and them going overboard with Harry's help just sends me off to laughing when I think of the things they could come up with. Maybe a muggle themed party(Harry should find what the pureblood think of muggle fashion amusing) or maybe the twins charm a room to make it appear ot be on the moon or in the heavens.
Liked the way that Harry didn't immediately trust Narcissa to live with him, though he should make sure that Andy and her have sufficiant protection at the Tonks residence.
Can't wait for the talk between Nym and Harry over the freak comment.
Maybe the twins could help with marketing the comm mirrors/crystals. Maybe Harry could set up an emergency services band so that anyone with a mirror or crystal could call a central operator and ask for help.
hell if that could work maybe he could set up a system like the early telephone system. All crystals/mirrors call a single office/operator at a switchboard(s) and that person connects you line/mirror to the other persons line/mirror so that you can talk to them. Potter Communcations is born and makes a fortune(Like AT&T in the US). Of course you would have to make arrangements so the central switchboard is secure from DeathEaters and such.
Another opportunity Harry might want to explore is setting up a wizard city. Why aren't their more purely wizard areas around. Harry is certainly rich enough to purchase a large plot of land-maybe an old town that was abandoned when a mine was no longer profitable. Setup a few apartment buildingings, some of those cookie cutter houses, a few empty plots, and a market area with main street stores and then post ads for tenenats. Some muggle repelling charms and such and you have a new wizarding town that will about grow on its own. between selling some houses and renting others you would stand to do quite well as far as return on investment went.
Later
Chris
Chris15 posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2005 2:21pm
Loved this chapter.
Tonks act was great. Can't wait to see what Witch Weekly prints about 'her'. Especially when they can't dig up info on who she is.
If Tonks is going to be someone different everytime then maybe she shold look like a Veela one time. I can just imagine all the girls upset about poor Harry being stolen by a Veela's charm.
Liked your characterization of Draco. he seems to be sitting on the fence, wonder what will push him off it.
Bad Mrs. Weasley hope someone shows her how wrong she is. I wonder what her children think about this, has she tried to control their lives too-is that why all the older kids move out as soon as possible.
Loved the characterization of Ron and Hermione, Harry has matured faster than them and their friendship is suffering for it. Hope Hermione and Ron grow up soon and repair the damage.
Loved the WWW board meeting. Can't wait to see what products the twins come out with for their spy line. Maybe some glasses that show you what is all around you(360) like those glasses that have the mirrors in the outside position so you can see behind you.
Makes it hard for people to sneak up on you.
One small mistake, you never said what Ingid looked like. Kinda hard to envision a scene without discription.
Later
Chris
Mark Blaine posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2005 12:10pm
Good work. Really enjoying this.
Prince Charon posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2005 10:03am
Very, very interesting.
More soon, please.
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Saturday 10th December 2005 8:26am