Elia950 posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 2:58pm for Epilogue

uhm ._. i don't really know what to say..
I really really liked how this story started.. it was going at a right place, and it was fast to read.. the lastest chapters have sadly, in my opinion, ruined the story a little..
I really loved how Tracy and Daphne where in this story and liked a lot too an Hermione who didn't like Ron.. i never liked him.
Well from the start you could see that this was going to end with at last one between Tracy, Daphne and Hermione dieing.. tough for as much as i like Hermione i would have prefer her as Daphne..
I know that a lot of stories of this 'type' doesn't end with romance or the like but i have got to say that i'm a little disappointing about this.. i acutally tough that Daphne would in the end be with Harry and Tracy would remain with him even if not like daphne..
I actually expected Hermione to be with Neville..
What can i say? i love a lot stories like this.. but sadly i'm one of 'The pairing is FONDAMENTAL in choosing what story to read'.. and i read very few stories that have a pairing i don't like o no pairing at all..
I'm a romantic.. and as such while the situation wasn't very good for romance i tough that it would have end up with a little more of that.. especially between harry\daphne\tracey..
apart from that i have to congratulate you for a very good story!!
Sorry if with this review i offended you in any way.. >.<
Elia.

Riegert8 posted a comment on Friday 1st January 2010 8:36pm for Epilogue

This is a good story, I just did not care how it ended. I thought that Harry would be paired with Tracy or Daphne, I have some hope that it will be both. At the end of story Hermione is paired with Nevile and Tracy is with Blaise,It seem that out the three Harry is the only that not paired with anyone.

Riegert8 posted a comment on Tuesday 29th December 2009 8:15pm for Epilogue

Very good story

Zicou posted a comment on Friday 27th November 2009 8:44pm for Epilogue

That was an awesome story, i don't know why i never got any warning of a new chapter since the 5 one.... so you can imagine my surprise yesterday when i saw it was complete!
So .. again, it was Awesome,i was surprised by your end, and that's great, it's not often we are surprised by an Epilogue !
Hope to read more of your stories soon.
Z.

jraven posted a comment on Saturday 14th November 2009 1:20pm for Epilogue

it was one of the best I've read in a while

Crys replied:

Glad you enjoyed it.

typa posted a comment on Monday 2nd November 2009 4:59pm for Epilogue

Like many others, I am curious as to what prompted the suddens shift from the earlier chapters to the last three.

Things really were moving along well, then it seemed like you were in a hurry to just put something out. We had some nice, couple thousand word chapters, then it seems as though things ran out of steam.

I am surprised you killed off Daphne, she and Harry had the most chemistry as you've written it.

While it's nice to see Harry as the Minister, it's a little disappointing that the ending came so quickly after a short battle and snap climax.

I loved the beginning, but the ending has left me with mixed feelings.

Jonathan Langford posted a comment on Monday 2nd November 2009 1:18am for Epilogue

I hate to say it, but this was a really unsatisfying ending to what had been a good story up until the last couple of installments. Feels like it ran out of steam. Not the high quality I'd come to expect from this author.

Time Shifter posted a comment on Saturday 31st October 2009 8:00pm for Epilogue

Normally I hate flaming, and refrain from it, but I can't fathom what inspired the sudden shift in writing in the last three chapters. You had the makings of a wonderful story, and then suddenly one of the girls is dead, the other divorces Harry, they go their separate ways, and we're just supposed to accept that that's the end. Of course it's your story and you can do with it what you want, but aside from messing with all of your readers who believed they were following an awesome story, I can't understand why you ended it this way. Could you at the very least explain why you changed the direction of the story at the end?

huskerfan posted a comment on Tuesday 27th October 2009 3:04pm for Epilogue

While Im glad that you posted this after the last chapter it still seems kind of flat to me. I guess after Daphne's death the story seems to have lost most of its drive for me at least.

Slayer89 posted a comment on Monday 26th October 2009 9:26am for Epilogue

It seems that many are unhappy with the epilogue, so i would like you to think of posting an alternate epilogue as well so evryone would be happy?

Anthony May posted a comment on Monday 26th October 2009 6:49am for Epilogue

Why couldn't you give Harry a woman? Why did you Kill off Daphne? They all went through sooo much together! Damnit you could of at least got him laid! Great Story but here's my ending... "Nancy closed the door and Harry proceeded to screw the brains out of Tracy and Hermione" The End - Now I'm happy. Seriously though, GREAT JOB!

Crys replied:

Why would he want to screw their brains out?   Their brains are what attracts him to them.

Instead, how about "Nancy closed the door, and Harry proceeded to screw them into a quivering puddle of orgasmic goo.   The End."

That better? :)

SassyFrass posted a comment on Sunday 25th October 2009 5:05pm for Epilogue

What!?
What kind of ending was that! I'm so sad. You left so many interesting threads dangling. You had such a great story, and then, nothing! Doesn't Harry get a happy ending too?
Why did you choose this direction to take it, and end it in?

But, thanks for sharing the story, and I really enjoyed most of it.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Sunday 25th October 2009 2:11pm for Epilogue

*chuckle* A most interesting tying up of some loose ends, but totally leaving it open as to how the situation between Harry, Tracey, and Hermione ever worked out. Personally this reader hopes that they managed to live qutie intimately together and "happily ever after".

rogue7 posted a comment on Sunday 25th October 2009 10:11am for Epilogue

Great chapter
Brilliant story

Crys replied:

Thank you.   Glad you enjoyed it.

dennisud posted a comment on Sunday 25th October 2009 10:09am for Epilogue

I'm only going to say that I think the author ran out of muse, or ideas and its became sort of another story.

Thanks much for the rest but the ending left me wanting.

Even if Harry hadn't ended up with any of the three girls that still left me with an empty feeling.

Cenladil posted a comment on Sunday 25th October 2009 5:46am for Epilogue

Umm, think I will stop there.

bukay posted a comment on Sunday 25th October 2009 1:37am for Epilogue

I feel slightly put off by this epilogue, so many things seem unfinished... It simply lacks something.

AlaskanKing66 posted a comment on Saturday 24th October 2009 5:24pm for Epilogue

Liked the story. Enjoyed reading it very much. However, I didn't like the epilogue so much. Harry is supposed to end up with the girls in the end.

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 24th October 2009 5:11pm for Epilogue

This is an interesting epilogue! You just had to tweak us didn't you? No one seems to know who Harry's love interest is. YOU are going to leave us to make up our own minds aren't you? YOU SLY DOG! Ok, I can live with that . This was quite an adventure. I look forward to more of this story but it looks like that isn't going to happen. Quite the prank. The marauders would be proud. Thanks for writing. pms

Crys replied:

*innocent smile*   Who, me?

Would I let each individual reader choose their own preference on who he's dating?

Thanks for reading.

jimbojones posted a comment on Saturday 24th October 2009 4:07pm for Epilogue

The first 7 chapters were great. Well written, good plot, great characters. I am kind of left wondering why the last 3 were sub-par at best, rushed beyond any reasonable measure, and ZERO character development, other than death.

After seeing this listed as complete, I feel the need to ask: What the hell?