By Crys
Reviews
BaltaineShadow posted a comment on Saturday 24th October 2009 7:27am
This story was just... awesome! Really made my day worth getting up in the morning :)
It was just sad that Daphne died... :'(
Well... thank you anyways for at least four hours of pure entertainment and pleasure!
Greetings, Baltaine
Crys replied:
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.
Hawklan posted a comment on Saturday 24th October 2009 7:11am
I really liked the story, but the last two chapters pulled it down a lot :(
Dracul posted a comment on Saturday 24th October 2009 6:32am
I feel that these last two chapters have been too rushed and leave too many questions unanswered. One big one is how Harry went from almost dying to being Minister of Magic.
LifeScientist posted a comment on Saturday 24th October 2009 5:41am
Maybe I like to be led too much but the last three chapters of this story were very unsatisfying. The outcomes of the relationships are unclear (particularly for harry) and the whole thing feels rushed.
Zucht posted a comment on Saturday 24th October 2009 5:16am
I enjoyed this story, up to the last three chapters. It seemed like you were bored with it. I'm glad that you at least ended it.Zucht413@yahoo.com
Charles Newton posted a comment on Saturday 24th October 2009 5:15am
All that build up for such a...lesser ending.
Nobody knows if Hermione, Tracy, or Harry are together with anyone else, much less each other.
This needs at least another chapter to clear this up, 'cause I'm a 'Happy endings for the Good Guys'n Gals are MANDATORY!'
ching965 posted a comment on Saturday 24th October 2009 5:12am
This was a wonderful close this story. Despite the fact that I'd have liked to see Tracy and Harry together at the end, I really liked how you did this. Minister Potter indeed. A lot of authors seem afraid to make Harry the minister of magic; I always thought he'd get there eventually no matter what. Thanks for a great story. I hope for more from you soon.
Wish you the best.
Crys replied:
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.
Manatheron posted a comment on Saturday 24th October 2009 3:55am
Ha!
Nice ^.^
Loved the fic, and I can't wait till the next one. Good to see your still active.
Crys replied:
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.
Carol Layland posted a comment on Saturday 24th October 2009 3:32am
Well A lot was skipped between the end of the story and the epiloug but I still like the story and Harry as Minister just blows my mind. Ron really needs angermanagment courses like we have here in the muggle world. Perhaps in some other story he will get that help as a suggestion from the super bright Hermione.. Carol Layland.
BJH posted a comment on Saturday 24th October 2009 2:03am
Your previous chapter was an unexpected twist that destroyed the image of a trite happy ending. It took me awhile to accept but I liked it.
But what was the point of this chapter?
BJH
Rexnos posted a comment on Saturday 24th October 2009 1:25am
A good story I guess, but I'm not a huge fan of tragedies. The ending felt very disjointed to me seeing as it ended vaguely and then only with two short flashbacks. I felt like I had to fight with your story to figure out what happened. I'm still only barely think I figured it all out.
Overall, a fun and interesting concept written well with an ending I didn't like. It's probably just me though seeing as I hate all endings. Keep up the good work in any case (which is more than I can say for most of the authors on this site dammit...)
Later,
Rex
Hypochondriac posted a comment on Saturday 24th October 2009 1:11am
Just had to add something. Some f the reviews are a bit harsh. While Tracy did keep part of Harrys money. It seems they forgot she had her parents pay the back taxes on Black manor. IIRC those taxes were more then Harry had. So he is actually richer then before.
Crys replied:
*laugh* Good point.
Thanks for reading.
Hypochondriac posted a comment on Saturday 24th October 2009 12:57am
So Hermione and Neville got together. I was actually right when I said it looked like the two of them were getting closer. Was that the plan frm the.begining or did you come up with that for the ending
Greg Johnson posted a comment on Saturday 24th October 2009 12:50am
Not what I was hoping for when this story started. But still a very enjoyable read.
Thank you for posting!!
I can't wait to see what you decide to post next.
Crys replied:
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.
lenny posted a comment on Saturday 24th October 2009 12:04am
wow the end again
lenny posted a comment on Saturday 24th October 2009 12:04am
wow
Aberbadger posted a comment on Friday 23rd October 2009 11:27pm
Nice idea, but rather seemed like you got bored in the end and thought "to hell with it, I just want this over and done with!"... It doesn't have to be a 30k epic, but it shouldn't be "oh, by the way, they lived happily ever after", either...
Slayer89 posted a comment on Friday 23rd October 2009 11:16pm
It was a good story! I dont know others sentiment on the last three chapter but for me was disappointing , but this only my opinion
sparrowphoenix posted a comment on Friday 23rd October 2009 11:04pm
Too Short :(
It was a good story, just wish the chapters were a bit longer :)
DJ posted a comment on Saturday 24th October 2009 8:19am