gadriam posted a comment on Wednesday 24th September 2008 3:38am

Erm.
I really don't know what to say except that this was brilliant. It wouldn't do for too long a fic, but it's good for five or six chapters of some serious quality. It's not your usual style, but I really want to see what happens next here.
Thanks.

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dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Wednesday 24th September 2008 3:35am

ROTFLMAO!!!

That was evil! I just had a thought, I wonder if their is a reverse version of that potion and what would happen if that spell was cast of Ginny.

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Wednesday 24th September 2008 3:14am

Well... it's either his karma being balanced or someone screwing him really hard! Probably both!

morriganscrow posted a comment on Wednesday 24th September 2008 2:26am

That was excellent, and would make the basis of a kick-arse story, in your talented hands!

liquidfyre posted a comment on Wednesday 24th September 2008 12:35am

ITS ALIIIIIIIIIVE

glad to see you still up and kicking crysy-poo and glad to see you breaking the dry spell we had on here the last few weeks hehe.

interesting story and definately one of the best harry gets freaky with his birdy stories i ever read.

Of course its only the second harry gets freaky with his birdy story i ever read but thats not the point heh

Crys replied:

[Crys backs carefully away from the mad scientist reviewer.]   Erm . . . "Crysy-poo?"

Thanks for the review

darthme1011 posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd September 2008 9:20pm

this could be made into an awesome story very cool twist on hedwig

Amamama posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd September 2008 9:09pm

*grins* Cool. Just - cool.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd September 2008 9:08pm

The Dumbledore-has-everyone-in-his-pocket-scenario is not uncommon, but this is a fascinating new twist on the idea. In all of those Harry has at least had Hedwig on his side. Even that cannot be said in this plot.

Well written and developed.

jilumasam posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd September 2008 7:25pm

*snorts* inelegantly.

I read this bunny thinking "now what thread did someone talk about Hedwig going human???"

Nice Bunny though...

ZanyMuggle posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd September 2008 5:56pm

What a fascinating piece. The amount of depth you put into Hedwig in such a short scene is amazing. It's a crying shame it's only a one-shot.

Talk about a manipulative Dumbledore!

Thanks for writing.

Crys replied:

Thanks for the kind words.   Glad you enjoyed

Wolff posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd September 2008 4:28pm

::starts humming the theme song from M*A*S*H*::

Talk about your rock and your hard place...

Crys replied:

*snort*   No kidding.   Poor kid.

For those who're lost, that tune is actually called "Suicide is Painless".

DrT posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd September 2008 11:48am

Harry apparently wakes up at the worst times!

Crys replied:

Doesn't he, though?

vertru posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd September 2008 10:38am

Very interesting little bunny there. I have to admit it caught me off guard when she identified herself. What an interesting turn of events. Taking a moment to read uberwald's post made it clear, at least to me, how that sort of idea would be hard to resist. Having seen a few variations on the theme of her becoming Harry's love interest in various ways, this one is about the best. On second thought, I would actually put it on a par with the one by Ishtar, which I can't recall the name of off-hand. Anyway, good go on this, my friend. It is always great to see a new piece of fanfiction from you.

Vern

Crys replied:

Yeah, this thing grabbed me by the throat when I read it.   And thank you for the compliment.   I'm in good company when compared to Ishtar, especially by another author I know and respect.

For those interested, the story by Ishtar that Vern is referring to is The One Who Always Loved Me.

Tabi posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd September 2008 9:54am

Oh what a bunny we have here...Please make another cahppie. Please!

Killedbykarma posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd September 2008 9:54am

NICE. This would actually make a really funny fanfic.

Carol Layland posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd September 2008 8:59am

Cute. I did like it.

Colpinky posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd September 2008 7:13am

Good chapter, and interesting concept. Keep up the good work.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd September 2008 3:22am

*chuckle* Hmm, talk about an "interesting" choice; I'm not sure what I'd do and I'm rather older and more experienced than Harry is, here. It's certainly an intriguing twist on a number of concepts and a good read.

Ben Russell-Gough posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd September 2008 1:30am

A very interesting manipulative!Dumbledore and pawn!Harry concept. I like your idea of an animagus Hedwig. The question is... is seducing Harry part of her orders? ;-)

Crys replied:

Personally, I can see it going either way.   I intentionally wrote it as ambiguously as possible so you get to decide the answer to that one.

Thanks for reviewing.

squidtamer posted a comment on Tuesday 16th October 2007 3:25pm

AH! Bad dream to wake from and miss the end...