squidtamer posted a comment on Tuesday 16th October 2007 2:53pm

LOL! This was good. Very Good.

Actually I think the perfect end to this would be
Ron or Harry trying to get Malfoy to go out with them. Or better yet perhaps Seamus.

squidtamer posted a comment on Tuesday 16th October 2007 12:56pm

I liked this part. Touch long for the intro (talk about a long boring dream!) but a fun finish though it was a little obvious to everyone ,including the readers, but Harry.

squidtamer posted a comment on Tuesday 16th October 2007 12:17pm

extra dark sauce eh? Good taste.

impliedauthor posted a comment on Tuesday 9th October 2007 3:41am

Some of these are really interesting. And I agree with your Harry, "It's annoying how my dreams always stop before I learn how they end." I'd love to learn what happens!

Gaelyn posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 1:31am

Ok...this last plot bunny of yours...I would REALLY get a kick out of a story that was based on that!

The potential for humor, for the two witches to give the "Power" by marrying him, there's just so much that could be done.

Great stuff! I'm looking forward to more of your work.

-G

razor_M posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd October 2007 10:56pm

hahahahahah!! potter is one lucky son of a bitch!! jeeze, thats awesome!

Milarqui posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd October 2007 1:08am

It was really funny! If only you just put one dream that only features a H/G and not a H/G/Hr (I don't like this one at all)

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Monday 1st October 2007 3:04am

LOL. That was absolutely brilliant. I especially like the fact Harry just outflew his broom. Great idea for a dream. More of these please.

crawfsh posted a comment on Sunday 30th September 2007 5:26pm

I remember that Slider's episode! Nice plot bunny you created. Hope someone adopts it.

Eric Oppen posted a comment on Sunday 30th September 2007 2:16pm

This deserves to be run with. Draco Malfoy, now a girl? I can see Millicent Bulstrode smiling evilly as she helps "Draca" fit into her new role..."No, dear, you've got to move differently. Right now, you strut through the halls like you were a guy or something." Meanwhile, she's savoring every second of the situation.

Eric Oppen posted a comment on Sunday 30th September 2007 2:09pm

*wicked snicker*

Oh, I like this idea!

UdderPD posted a comment on Sunday 30th September 2007 1:57am

Aww, poor Harry.

Infin1x posted a comment on Saturday 29th September 2007 1:27pm

This would have been really lame if it was made into a full story, very cliched. But this short slightly surreal/comedic approach makes it work nicely.

Crys replied:

I thought so too, which is why I left it in the short, incomplete stage.   There are somethings that could be added (trying to live like this for a day or two), but not enough to turn this into a full-on story.

Thanks for the review.

Illusia posted a comment on Saturday 29th September 2007 4:12am

This was so funny! Just imagening their faces :)

gadriam posted a comment on Friday 28th September 2007 5:01pm

I agree with Harry on this one. It would be fun to see what this kind of story would end up as with a competent author.

brad posted a comment on Friday 28th September 2007 7:42am

I've always liked that multi-chaptered short story you wrote a while ago, about 'the morning after the night before', where Harry, Hermione and Ginny matter-of-factly realise that both girls love Harry and that they can both share him and live 'happily ever after'? Lovely feel to that story, no action or angst, just a satisfying coda to Harry's tale, where we read the final words and are happy for him and the girls, knowing that he's found love and will be content. Beats the hell out of a limp 'All was well'. :-)

Anyway, this has echoes of that story, although a little more contrived :-). I enjoyed the HBP corrections :-) - it seems Harry's dream!Hermione here didn't have the lobotomy that JKR gave her in the sixth book, re 'Won-won and Lav-lav'? Good show. Also agreed that Ginny's jealousy game was a 'very juvenile thing to do', although if she's stuck to Harry I'll try hard to believe that her personality, too, was 'skewed' from the canon!brat!Ginny that I so dislike.

I am a little miffed,though, that at no point does Hermione mention that *she's* in love with Harry. NOT in love with Ron, sure; but nothing positive with regard to Potter. I would have liked a sentence or two along those lines just to cement things in.

And clever final line, of course, leading into that 'happy ending'. Thanks for the story!

Crys replied:

Contrived?   Well, there is that :)

> I turned to Hermione.   "Help," I pleaded in an unsteady voice.
> She smiled.   "Oh, goody.   I get to wash your front, then?"

Okay, I don't explicitly state that Hermione loves him, but I thought that line implied the hell out of it.

Thanks for the review.

bgoldnyxnet posted a comment on Friday 28th September 2007 4:43am

Hah! It's scary when the review is funnier than the story, especially when the story is as funny as this one.

Ravenclawchaser68 posted a comment on Friday 28th September 2007 2:43am

Oh, you're a bastard. That was a fun little story, and you just haaaaaad to leave it hanging there. Thanks for writing.
Jay

Chris1 posted a comment on Thursday 27th September 2007 11:18pm

*grin*

Lovely :D Reminds me of that fic on thequidditchpitch.org, where Harry, Ron and Hermione get stuck together that way ^_^

Of course, I like your version better :D

Thanks for sharing this with us :)

Chris

redjacobson posted a comment on Thursday 27th September 2007 11:03pm

Now that was fun! I really hope that Harry gets to continue that dream, I'd love to see how it ends as well *GRIN*

red