Dream Journal of Harry J Potter

dennisud posted a comment on Thursday 25th November 2010 6:53pm

They ARE like that aren't they!
Still i'd be nice to see the results none the less!

dennisud posted a comment on Thursday 25th November 2010 4:46pm

This HAS to be continued if for no other reason than the Comedy that would ensue!
I also would LOVE to see Ron in this as he'd be sterile!
;-)

Wolfric posted a comment on Thursday 25th November 2010 2:36pm

Good story. I like stories where Harry is living a reasonably pleasent life after all the turmoil. My questions would be: How do you know how many elementals you can control and what happens if you try to control more than your capability? It is good to hear from you again. Thanks for writing. W.

Crys replied:

The nice version:
Part of the ritual to call up another elemental is a test of magical strength. If you fail the test, you can't pull any more.

The not-so nice version:
If you have too many, some/all will break loose from their control. Whether they simply "go home" or try to attack you is up to them.

Thanks for the review.

SasparillaX posted a comment on Thursday 25th November 2010 6:35am

"No, I think I'm going to keep that dream to myself."

Awwww... keeping the good stuff to yourself, that's just cruel :P then why mention it!

David Thacker posted a comment on Thursday 25th November 2010 4:02am

That was great and most likely the closets{spelling? or right word} to what they might be if they where real keep up the great work with this story and your other.

Jonathan Langford posted a comment on Wednesday 24th November 2010 5:31pm

This is really delightful. I can only wish that it wasn't part of the dream journal but actually the beginning of a story... except that I wouldn't really want to read the rest of the story, since the only characters I like from this one (besides Harry) are Fred and George. Oh, yes, and the goblins.

wolfkin posted a comment on Wednesday 24th November 2010 4:50pm

"The concept of Elementals as explained here is loosely based on the early Shadowrun novels." Thought I recognized it. Really liked this chapter/story and would like to see the elemental characters in another story, if possible. Good work, as usual! ^_^

QOShea posted a comment on Wednesday 24th November 2010 3:46pm

Very nice, would love to see this fleshed out if you want to continue it.

Ancalador posted a comment on Wednesday 24th November 2010 3:45pm

Interesting way of setting out drabbles. Some interesting ideas there, I especially like the idea of Harry growing up and befriending a group of elementals that actually have personalities of their own.

Keep up the good work

Patches posted a comment on Wednesday 24th November 2010 2:32pm

This is really interesting. Thanks for a unique view of something I have heard but not really understood before. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more Dream Journals. pms

Keronshara posted a comment on Wednesday 24th November 2010 11:45am

Hehehehehe!!! Harry was so "mean" to Vernon. Love it!

Keronshara posted a comment on Wednesday 24th November 2010 11:30am

Reindeer are real. They are also called caribou. Sadly they can't fly. Or if they can then the stupid animals are entirely too good at hiding that fact.

Clell65619 posted a comment on Wednesday 24th November 2010 9:23am

- Nice. This is an example of elemental magic I've not seen before.

Abraxan posted a comment on Friday 10th September 2010 4:53am

I can see him wanting that. Well done.

Abraxan

Crys replied:

I just wondered what he would ask for if given the choice after the Final Battle (tm), and the story ballooned from there.

Abraxan posted a comment on Friday 10th September 2010 4:44am

I have to agree with Euphemism - that's priceless! What a hoot! Well done!

Abraxan

Abraxan posted a comment on Friday 10th September 2010 1:47am

Sweet, in every possible way. Too bad Harry never had a Halloween like this, but I'll bet he made sure his kids did.

Abraxan

Crys replied:

One of the recurring themes in fanon: Harry gives his kids the life he wished he had.

This bunny just ambushed me a couple days before Halloween a few years back. Just too perfect to ignore.

By Crys

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