By Crys
Reviews
BenRG posted a comment on Wednesday 21st September 2005 12:55am
As I think I mentioned on Jeconais' message board, this is a lovely story, and one of the few that handles what I call 'HMS Indecisive' (aka H/G/Hr) in what I regard to be a sensible way - ignoring all explanations and just getting on with it! ;-)
Seriously, you managed to get all the characters more-or-less IC (although the concept of RW/CC makes my eyes bulge). The ending conversation between Dean and McGonagall was lovely and I loved how having a girlfriend changed Neville.
I wouldn't say "no" to a sequel, possibly a sort of "The Week After" explaining how Harry, Hermione and Ginny explain their altered living arrangements to their family and friends.
All in all this was a funny, enjoyable and surprisingly innocent story in many ways. I especially liked your 'inner monologue' of Harry's from in chapter one.
BenRG's Rating: 9/10
Well done for making one of my favorite ships respectable!
G posted a comment on Wednesday 21st September 2005 9:14am