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Cassandra30 posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2011 7:22pm for 35 - Fight at the Leaky Cauldron

Truly excellent! I wish Harry had gotten there earlier and been able to save Draco.

noylj posted a comment on Tuesday 26th August 2008 5:32pm for 35 - Fight at the Leaky Cauldron

Does he trust Bumbles with his life? If so, he had best re-evaluate his attitude towards the lemon-addled, pedophilic, incompetent, senile, amoral, bastard with delusions of adequacy. Please, I know the story is complete and this is my third or forth reading, but in some story, take that stick out of Min butt and make her more humane to the children under her "care."

Tammy Driver posted a comment on Friday 4th July 2008 1:20am for 35 - Fight at the Leaky Cauldron

Poor Draco! I hope Lucius dies, painfully, and soon, for what he's done.

Crys replied:

There are fates far worse than death to be had for a proud aristocrat such as he.

dougal74 posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd June 2008 10:10am for 35 - Fight at the Leaky Cauldron

good chapter

m4rk6 posted a comment on Monday 2nd July 2007 4:41am for 35 - Fight at the Leaky Cauldron

Thank you for killing off Draco, nothing makes me quit a fic faster than a redeemed Draco. There are a few exceptions, notably the Dangerverse series.

I do understand why Harry is acting the way he is. If I were 16 years old, had almost unlimited power and wealth, I'd lord it over people too.

I rarely read fics where the trio is broken, its only the quality of your writing that makes this one palatable. I just skim over the parts where Ron's acting like a spoiled brat and Hermione's acting like a harpy. I look forward to more chapters.

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Saturday 5th August 2006 7:00am for 35 - Fight at the Leaky Cauldron

Poor DUMBledore! Spanked by the *Sorting Hat*! Did the Headmaster forget that Hogwarts herself is sentient? Someone give Albus a clue, please!

noylj posted a comment on Friday 14th July 2006 9:47am for 35 - Fight at the Leaky Cauldron

What a waste. I hate Malfoy and love to see him and Snape turn into toast, but you gave us a few scenes of Malfoy considering his life and then you just kill him and not even let Harry hit Lucy. You are cruel...

Sssith posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2006 3:20pm for 35 - Fight at the Leaky Cauldron

Ah...even though Draco turned his back on his Malfoy name I still feel no pity at his death.

I also continue to enjoy Harry sticking it to Dumbledore. On to 36.

Ronnie McMains posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2006 2:45pm for 35 - Fight at the Leaky Cauldron

At the rate Albus is going, will we find Harry working out some variant of the Fidelius charm? 'The first name of Lord Potter-Black is Harry.' or the like? He'd be able to tell the people who he wanted to call him by name, but Albus (and Fudge, however much longer he lasts), would finally have to acknowledge that, yes, he's Lord Potter, and no, he doesn't like them.

Crys replied:

*blink*  LOL

That, Ronnie, is brilliant.

The Resident posted a comment on Wednesday 12th July 2006 11:14am for 35 - Fight at the Leaky Cauldron

Lovely. Absolutely lovely. Thank you very much for this chapter. I enjoyed it immensely. I doubt much that Dumbledore or Snape have learned anything, though. Keep up the excellent work.

brad posted a comment on Tuesday 11th July 2006 11:39pm for 35 - Fight at the Leaky Cauldron

So, you killed Draco!! I can't say I'm heartbroken over it - in an author's response you reminded me that he was still selfish and not 'converted' into being one of the good guys. He might have been difficult to keep writing into the story?

WHY WAS HERMIONE AT THE RAVENCLAW TABLE??? Has she decided that the Gryffindor credo in general - action before thought - is untenable, or is it just a personal reaction to Ron? Hermione being my favourite character I hope to read about this eventually later on?

Warding against legilimency was a great idea, as was the notion of Alistair gifting Harry with three memories - that was a novel and quite touching notion.

Crys replied:

I killed Draco for a whole variety of reasons.  One of them was that I was having a difficult time figuring out what to do with him, but that wasn't the primary one.

Hermione being at the Ravenclaw table will be explained in chapter 37.

Dragen posted a comment on Saturday 8th July 2006 4:46am for 35 - Fight at the Leaky Cauldron

Very great chapter, I'm sorry to hear about Draco being killed by his Dad, he might be a git and Harry and him don't get on, but Draco shouldn't been killed.

Keep up the good work, and PLEASE update real soon.

atlantis-rob posted a comment on Friday 7th July 2006 11:32pm for 35 - Fight at the Leaky Cauldron

Excellent if sad chapter, sucks that Draco had to be killed, and hopefulyl lucius will get his soon. Great job with how harry dealt with snape and ron and how ginny managed the response. The dialogue is great and the plot continues to be fresh and move along at a nice pace, though I expect it will speed up a bit with the ending of the hols. Cheers!

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Friday 7th July 2006 12:17pm for 35 - Fight at the Leaky Cauldron

Ah, a chapter well worth the wait. The fight at the Leaky Cauldron was nicely done and, while I hated to see it, Draco's death was well-scripted. The scenes at Hogwart's definitely worked well, adhering to what had already been established while developing things further. I do hope Ron learns something from what he almost caused; points to Ginny for recognizing the potential for trouble and quickly defusing it.

jdcox61 posted a comment on Friday 7th July 2006 12:03pm for 35 - Fight at the Leaky Cauldron

haha, this chapter's great. I think that this story is awesome, i was kinda miffed that you gave ole draco the shaft. o well, it's not my story. good work!

texasranger_10 posted a comment on Friday 7th July 2006 10:28am for 35 - Fight at the Leaky Cauldron

i am sorry for not reviewing before. but i have followed this story for quite awhile and i logve the way it is written. keep up the good work.

Faith1 posted a comment on Friday 7th July 2006 9:42am for 35 - Fight at the Leaky Cauldron

AWESOME! I love that he still trusts "Min"
also, I like that Gin was sensible enough to apologize.

-Faith

Shadow High Angel posted a comment on Friday 7th July 2006 8:04am for 35 - Fight at the Leaky Cauldron

Great chapter, loved the fight, not to mention how he handled things at Hogwarts.

Davideg posted a comment on Friday 7th July 2006 6:58am for 35 - Fight at the Leaky Cauldron

fantastic chapter cant wait to read the next one so please update agin a.s.a.p.

Patches posted a comment on Friday 7th July 2006 6:23am for 35 - Fight at the Leaky Cauldron

A very good chapter. I am sorry that Draco had to die. Especially after he had "seen the light". It does show Lucius in his true light though. From the description of Lucius he has obviously lost his mind to madness. Hopefully Harry has finally gotten through to Dumbledore about his name and how he is viewed by Harry. I'm glad the Hat was able to clarify Harry's intentions on the points system. It is really good that Snape was stunned and doesn't have any memory of the rest of the discusstion. Thanks for writing. pms