Wanderer posted a comment on Sunday 17th November 2019 6:31pm for 31 - Yule Ball teen party

Still no lunacy, but not for a lack of craziness lol

Rowenasheir posted a comment on Sunday 13th October 2019 7:53am for 31 - Yule Ball teen party

I notice the nod to Bob and Alyx!

gtgrouch posted a comment on Friday 1st August 2014 9:47am for 31 - Yule Ball teen party

Well, as a food-fight it was pretty tame, but as a bit of slapstick humor it wasn't bad. : )

55Hints posted a comment on Friday 27th May 2011 3:35pm for 31 - Yule Ball teen party

i liked it but it was to long - winded im quitting for now

dougal74 posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd June 2008 9:42am for 31 - Yule Ball teen party

good chapter

Dragen posted a comment on Saturday 8th July 2006 3:25am for 31 - Yule Ball teen party

great chapter, and a food fight at the end, GREAT... keep up the good work!

atlantis-rob posted a comment on Friday 7th July 2006 9:48pm for 31 - Yule Ball teen party

Finally catching up on my FFA reviews now...heheh. Anyways, great job with this entire chapter, and overall the way the whole story has been flowing in the next whole bunch of chapters. The talk with the rest of the teens was great especially Neville and the DA and how the mini food fight happened. Great job on the continued growth of h/t relationship. Cheers!

Olaf posted a comment on Thursday 4th May 2006 4:13am for 31 - Yule Ball teen party

Its absolutely great. please continue it very very soon!

Rictor posted a comment on Wednesday 26th April 2006 11:03am for 31 - Yule Ball teen party

Love the story, can't wait for more....UPDATE PLZ!!!!

Alchemist_pac posted a comment on Tuesday 18th April 2006 5:12pm for 31 - Yule Ball teen party

good story you have going here, keep up the good work.

reimanr06 posted a comment on Monday 17th April 2006 4:03pm for 31 - Yule Ball teen party

You missed the one part of a real teen party that just throws the whole thing out of whack: a boatload of alcohol. Especially in Britain, where booze is extremely easy to get if you are 16, as opposed to just easy in America.

Jarvey posted a comment on Thursday 13th April 2006 5:59pm for 31 - Yule Ball teen party

Oi! Update this one... (That is I, the demanding, unpaying reader demanding your time and effort.... hmm... Promise I'll review?)

Crys replied:

*laugh*   At least you have a sense of humor about it your demands :)

You'll be happy to know that the next chapter is at beta, but is unlikely to get posted for a couple weeks.   Real Life (tm) is being a pest both to me and my betas.   Sorry, but that's the best we can do right now.

avatar99 posted a comment on Wednesday 12th April 2006 3:40pm for 31 - Yule Ball teen party

I really like where you're going with this. Keep it up.

Lyon Pride posted a comment on Sunday 9th April 2006 4:38pm for 31 - Yule Ball teen party

Sorry to not have reviewed any earlier chapters, this is one of those stories that grabs you and doesn't let go. But now that this is the last currently posted chapter I have a chance to stop and think.

In general, I love what you've done here, if I have any big issues its with Remus, but I understand that take on him. I've never seen Fudge as being his own man, and I had always wondered who was pulling his strings in the background.

Is there a magic that sees through morphs?

Crys replied:

Hmm.   A sufficiently powerful Revealing Spell might .   Interesting question.

Alcatras posted a comment on Friday 7th April 2006 12:10am for 31 - Yule Ball teen party

That was a funny end for a chapter.
We all are waiting for the next one.

Ravenfur posted a comment on Monday 3rd April 2006 8:20am for 31 - Yule Ball teen party

An awsome story. I thought it kinda funny that you're pulling names (Kinsfire, Bob & Alyx) from other authors. Please update soon!

Wookie13 posted a comment on Saturday 1st April 2006 10:11pm for 31 - Yule Ball teen party

I truely love this story. There was a similar theme on FF.com that kinda made Harry with Hermione the controling factor in the wizarding world (King and Queen) but the effect is that Harry was never allowed to find our about the Potter line and Heritage and made enemies with DD over being kept in the dark.

Highschool Nerd posted a comment on Saturday 1st April 2006 6:18pm for 31 - Yule Ball teen party

I love this chapter! I was laughing like crazy throughout the whole time. I really liked the end of this chapter- the accidental incident..lol

Mariposa posted a comment on Wednesday 29th March 2006 6:26am for 31 - Yule Ball teen party

Oooooooo! Great ending to this chapter! Can't wait for more! Bravo!

Johnny_Higurashi posted a comment on Tuesday 28th March 2006 11:55am for 31 - Yule Ball teen party

You're doing a great job on this story. Like the story.