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Shadowdog posted a comment on Monday 29th February 2016 6:09pm for 13 - Harry versus Dumbledore

Finally! A story with realistic anger! Beautiful. And it's in multiple chapters/cases!

Noble Korhedron posted a comment on Thursday 5th June 2014 3:16pm for 13 - Harry versus Dumbledore

After thanking the centaur divination professor, Harry headed toward the Entrance Hall again, Tonks still in tow.

"Eventful day," she commented.

"Yep. About this damn werewolf legislation though, I still need to speak with -"

"Potter!"

Harry looked up in surprise before a slow, feral smile formed. "Fudge."

OH-OH!! *EVIL GRIN*

reader1writer1 posted a comment on Wednesday 8th June 2011 2:36pm for 13 - Harry versus Dumbledore

Great chapter. (and good use of the word plethora) :)

Cassandra30 posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2011 4:21pm for 13 - Harry versus Dumbledore

Love it! I truly do! Fawkes knows that Dumbles is going Dark if not already more than half way there. I do think that while Severus can stay in the castle he shouldn't teach. He should do research and be HoH.

noylj posted a comment on Monday 25th August 2008 10:07am for 13 - Harry versus Dumbledore

Fudge...as in "A Christmas Story" fudge. Just re-reading for the fourth time, or so.

dougal74 posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd June 2008 5:20am for 13 - Harry versus Dumbledore

good chapter

noylj posted a comment on Monday 16th July 2007 5:27pm for 13 - Harry versus Dumbledore

And here I thought it was a herd of rabbits. My only complaint is that the story is moving too fast. Need to slow and savor some of these moments. this chapter is particular has several moments that could have been more fully realized.

Adriana Lant posted a comment on Saturday 30th September 2006 3:03pm for 13 - Harry versus Dumbledore

I'm starting to slightly dislike Harry, as I've always liked Dumbledore. Though, this Harry does point out very true tidbits. Harry can't quit, 'cause then he'll never see Ginny! What did he do to the points system, and what did he tell McGonagall about? What bunnies? Great chapter. Keep writing!

Sterling posted a comment on Wednesday 20th September 2006 4:02pm for 13 - Harry versus Dumbledore

I am liking this story quite a bit so far. I only wish to make a few points. One, In this chapter I feel Harry's transition to an almost supremely self-assured character was pretty abrupt. I feel that Harry does have it in him to be like you presented but I also think that it would be a slower process. Of course this is just an IMO and should not be taken as any sort of flame. The only other thing I noticed is that a lot of your chapters seem to stop abruptly, making the flow of the story a bit jarring at times. Overall, however, this has been a wonderful story to read and I am enjoying what you have to share with us. Thanks.

Aurilia posted a comment on Tuesday 28th February 2006 6:36pm for 13 - Harry versus Dumbledore

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Monday 13th February 2006 7:40am for 13 - Harry versus Dumbledore

Ch.13 - - I hate it when and Harry and Dumbledore don't get along, but this turn in their relationship is much more realisitic then the start of HBP.

I've done it differently in my sixth year, but still they have to resolve a good deal that has passed between them.

I like this a LOT!

Pleather Boots posted a comment on Sunday 29th January 2006 5:56pm for 13 - Harry versus Dumbledore

I am in so much trouble! I have homework and I was planning on taking a break after this chapter!!!! And then you bring in Fudge....

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Saturday 10th December 2005 7:42am for 13 - Harry versus Dumbledore

Outstanding, looks like Fudge is about to get his....lol.


gunny

Chris posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd November 2005 9:51am for 13 - Harry versus Dumbledore

Loved Harry's indignation over Dumbledores not even fighting the Werewolf Act.

Does Harry have a seat on the Wizangomot. Maybe he could appoint someone else to sit it, as he is a little too busy for all the politics it would entail.

Thought Snape deserved more punishment. Harry promised not to go to the Board or Ministry about his behaviour but maybe if Dumbles doesn't keep his word about the intelliigence(which everyone knows he won't) Harry could write some concerned letters to the parents of muggleborn and halfblood students, as well as some of the students who have already graduated. They are no longer at Hogwarts so what do they have to loose by signing a petition against Snape.

Maybe if the Board sends someone to observe, Harry can have Snape set up, a few pranks against him and a run in with Peeves and his mood will be so foul their is no chance he won't act out against some little Gryffindors(preferably first years as that just makes him look meaner and more of a bully)

Can't wait to see how Harry changed the House Point system.

Later

P.S. Have you thought of having Harry bug GP12. Maybe use some muggle electronic devices that Moody wouldn't recognize to keep track of the Order and gain proof that Dumbledore will break his word.

hpnana posted a comment on Thursday 6th October 2005 12:22pm for 13 - Harry versus Dumbledore

WHAT???? Are you going to leave here??? NOT Fair...


I have enjoyed so far the ride, even though this Dumbledore is kind of hard for me to swallow. Keeping an open Mind here...


Thanks for sharing your story

Best Regards,

HPNana

Dorothy posted a comment on Thursday 6th October 2005 8:08am for 13 - Harry versus Dumbledore

Given the problems Harry is having with Dumbledork, I'm very surprised he didn't do anything about that compulsion spell. Could he just break it? Or is there a way of investigating it when he is not in DD's presence? Either way, someone with so much influence should not be left under something like that. I find myself wondering if that is perhaps the reason DD has supported Snape so vehemently all this time, and if it were broken, would Snape find himself summarily ejected from Hogwarts?

Excellent chapter, looking forward to the next.

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Wednesday 5th October 2005 1:17am for 13 - Harry versus Dumbledore

More! You ended it just when it was getting good!

Prince Charon posted a comment on Tuesday 4th October 2005 6:34am for 13 - Harry versus Dumbledore

I'm impressed. Thank you, this is really good.

More soon, please.

Brad posted a comment on Monday 3rd October 2005 11:02pm for 13 - Harry versus Dumbledore

Great chapter! You know it's a good story when it seems like no time passed at all when you get to the end, and your first reaction is to shout 'MORE!!!', because you just want to keep going. Good stuff. Most enjoyable to see Harry assert himself and get a bit of power, viz the ring and his inheritance.

(Seems to me I've been reading a few anti-Dumbledore stories lately - this, Journeyman Potter, Sunset over Britain, Jeconais's WKGQ, etcetera. But it's always good fun to read a well-written piece that doesn't stretch one's belief beyond the breaking point)

I'll have to pay more attention to your Yahoo group, I don't recall any of those bunnies. Mind you, I've got the last couple of digests sitting in my IN box unread, because I didn't want to have my reading of this chapter spoilt.

Can't wait to see how Harry altered the points system; I suspect it'll kick in when Snape next tries to take points away from Gryffindor. But I don't know what rules he could institute that would keep things fair and still give Snape the authority to deduct/award points in a balanced/justified manner, as befitting any teacher. Hmmm. Concensus? Needing two teachers' agreement?

Okay, I *insist* that Harry and Hermione make friends. Hermione *did* only commit her 'minor betrayal' because she thought it was in her best friend's interest. And Harry HAS changed (a lot!) from the end of OotP, and he still hasn't - as far as I know - seen fit to tell her much of his changed circumstances. Maybe this is shaping up to be a significant minor plot of yours ... maybe when they next meet there's going to be some more heated words, things escalating again, with Harry having now been told of her offence and given the nature of his last communique with her. But I still believe that if he were to go 'logical' on her and explain things out, she - if she let her mind rule her emotions - would accept how things have changed and apologise. And he would accept her apology, wanting to keep her friendship.

... please? You've got me slightly worried here.

Good chapter, eager for MORE!

Bobmin356 posted a comment on Monday 3rd October 2005 6:29pm for 13 - Harry versus Dumbledore

This was pretty good, lots of neat dumbledork bashing which is always a plus. The only thing missing now is the required Ron and Hermione castration. :D