The Unknown Power
January 26 to June
By Crys
Reviews
Patches posted a comment on Monday 20th March 2006 10:16am for January 26 to June
That was a great chapter and finish. A great story. I really like the fact that Percy got straightened out. I like Harry's secret weapon. A great way to end a duel. A nice epilog. 5 years later their son is born. A great ending. Thank you so much for writing it.
pms
Hot48cricket posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 6:38am for January 26 to June
Loved your story....it was well written.
HermioneGreen posted a comment on Monday 6th March 2006 3:06pm for January 26 to June
A most awesome and thrilling tale.
Thanks for the ride.
'Mione
TomokiG posted a comment on Thursday 2nd March 2006 12:17am for January 26 to June
Hey... your story was definitely fun to read. Good work.
°TomokiG °
Rocky235 posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 5:45pm for January 26 to June
Bravo! Bravo! (Wild clapping ensues.)
"And the Oscar for best screen writer goes to..
Cryssss."
(People are standing, thunderous applause fills the air.)
Crys replied:
"Thank you, thank you. I couldn't have done it without help from many, many people -"
[twenty minutes of dull speech removed to save server space]
Seriously, thanks for letting me know you liked it.
Mikee posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 1:34pm for January 26 to June
Whoa.... I just spent the day reading your delightful story. I absolutely loved it. I so enjoyed how you characterized everyone. I was a little worried throughout the story that Voldie would return. The black stuff that rose above his body after Ginny and Harry 'killed' him was what worried me. I'm quite glad he didn't return. I would like to know if Percy was accepted back into the family. Thank you for a wonderful story.
Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Monday 30th January 2006 11:52pm for January 26 to June
Final - - This was a very well rounded story, bringing in some action and angst, but most letting us see Harry and Ginny reap the fruits of their strong life together.
I love the ending note about Orion.
Very well done indeed!
Crys replied:
Thanks. It was a blast to write.
David Thacker posted a comment on Thursday 26th January 2006 5:45am for January 26 to June
Two things.Frist love the fact that you used the warm drinks most do not and that is even the ones from over there.Second who where the five that silenced(spelling?) Ron I belive Hermione was one but what about the others?
Crys replied:
Hmm, the five who cast the Silencing Charm?
Hadn't even thought of it, really. Just that more than one would be affected by the scene going on in front of them and would want to shut Ron up.
Well, here's a (what I think to be) reasonable list: Hermione, Natalie McDonald (Ginny's friend), Neville, Susan Bones, and Parvati.
Puck1 posted a comment on Tuesday 24th January 2006 3:11pm for January 26 to June
Wow. Excellant!!!!!!!
Starlightsuprise posted a comment on Friday 13th January 2006 2:49am for January 26 to June
Good story, very well written. However, for some reason ic ould not read christmas day to new year and i wonder is it possible for you to e-mail me the chapter.
Thanks
P.S. well done for doing such a brill job
Aberbadger posted a comment on Thursday 12th January 2006 10:45am for January 26 to June
Just another small point...
A person with the ability to talk to snakes is known as a Parselmouth. The language they speak is parseltongue....
Lira posted a comment on Sunday 8th January 2006 10:35am for January 26 to June
I totally loved your story. It's well written and very original. I totally love the idea of how it is not just Harry alone who defeats Voldemort but that he needs the help of a partner, something that's completely unheard of in het-fiction and in slash-fiction usually seems to need a soulbond with Snape or so. Also, while you went with the canon-pairings H/G, R/Hr (which incidentally are the pairings I favor when reading het-fiction), you did it without falling into any of the clichés I've seen a lot of time in a Harry/Ginny-pairing. And I liked the fact that you did not end your story with Voldemort's death but showed Harry's concern for Remus and gave him something worthwhile to do even "after fulfilling his destiny". Well done! *claps* More like this!
Only one thing I noticed that really bothered me (and which bothers me every time I see it in fanfiction!) You used both fiancée and fiancé in your story; at one time Ginny refers to herself as Harry's "fiancé" and lateron she calls Harry her "fiancée". Fiancée and fiancé being French, however, the extra e is to mark the word as referring to a female. In other words Ginny is Harry's fiancée and he is her fiancé.
Bob Joyce posted a comment on Thursday 5th January 2006 7:31am for January 26 to June
Excelent
Thanks
Bob
MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Thursday 22nd December 2005 5:34am for January 26 to June
What a GREAT! story. The best part was how Harry asked Ginny to marry him. You could really do a sequel to this stoy having Draco take up as the new DARK LORD spot.
Again Great story.
keep up the wonderful writting.
MPF
ssecca01 posted a comment on Wednesday 21st December 2005 10:53am for January 26 to June
I really really enjoyed this story. I like how Harry and Ginny defeated Moldywort near the beginning of the story instead of the end like nearly all other HP stories do. Thanks for the great read!
Robin Westerly posted a comment on Monday 28th November 2005 1:35pm for January 26 to June
Squeek!
Wow!
I have never read a story athis good about after their victory. It is wonderful.
Thankyou for a fabulous story
Good morning
Jimbocous posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd November 2005 7:03am for January 26 to June
Nicely done. Thanks for a great read!
Jamie46 posted a comment on Sunday 20th November 2005 5:46pm for January 26 to June
awwwwwwwwwwwwww :) Man, what a CUTE story. ;) hehehe. I admit to being really surprised when they confronted Voldemort in chapter 2, but I *really* like how you death with all the aftermath stuff. Overall, truly a fantastic story. ;) I hope Malfoy`s doing something unpleasant...like learning how to live as a pauper :-D hehehe. I like the `happy ending`, with Wolfden, the Scholarship Fund, the baby, good careers... and even Simon got in on the benefits ;) hehehe. `Senior Editor`. Way to go, Simon.
heheh, overall, just a great, feel-good story. :) Love it. Thanks for sharing... Now I`m off to pick another one of your stories...
patrik svensson posted a comment on Tuesday 1st November 2005 2:14am for January 26 to June
grejt story,
keep upp the good work.
Opinions are like assholes.
Everyone has one - but some just smell worse than others.
Brad Crawford posted a comment on Saturday 6th May 2006 4:12pm for January 26 to June