Wanderer posted a comment on Saturday 16th November 2019 8:43pm for 9 - Attack on the Shacklebolts

Excellent chapter, very good flow and a huge step forward for Harry in the course of warfare.

It's not what I'd want for anyone, but for what he's facing, it was a necessary step :(

Seraphy posted a comment on Friday 25th October 2019 7:22pm for 9 - Attack on the Shacklebolts

Seriously? He faints when he learns he killed someone? He killed Quirrel. He shouldn't be reacting this strongly. Bad enough he vomits after using reducto during the fight. *sigh* he's such a pussy.

Cassandra30 posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2011 3:53pm for 9 - Attack on the Shacklebolts

Yeppers. That would be quite a shock alright. but he made the difference in the battle. I note the Aurors haven't got there yet.

maddsloth posted a comment on Sunday 21st March 2010 12:24am for 9 - Attack on the Shacklebolts

Kingsley was just checking the second of these when he sighed and shook his head. "This one's gone," he pronounced.
- While I can get Harry’s "I just killed someone" thing Kingsley sighing and shaking his head about the death of someone that just tried to murder him his wife and child? It is no wonder these do-gooders suck when it comes to fighting. Maybe if Kingsley had not tried to take the 4 in his house with tickling charms his house would not have been set on fire.

I hope the story does not have the "thou shall not kill" attitude and Harry does not mope around for 5 chapters about the poor Death Eater.

dougal74 posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd June 2008 4:23am for 9 - Attack on the Shacklebolts

good chapter

noylj posted a comment on Monday 16th July 2007 12:24pm for 9 - Attack on the Shacklebolts

Wuss. Harry beter grow a pair and quick.

Zane Wyrick posted a comment on Sunday 1st July 2007 2:21pm for 9 - Attack on the Shacklebolts

So...what is the pairing for this fic?
Ginny, Hermione, or Tonks?
It was listed under HP/NT, so...
But the letter really threw me off..

Adriana Lant posted a comment on Saturday 30th September 2006 10:10am for 9 - Attack on the Shacklebolts

So, who was it?!?! Poor Harry! I'd never be able to get through that, knowing I killed another human being, even if it was a Death Eater. Not many people can write combat very well, so it's a treat to read. Harry's letter and gift were very sweet! This was a very good chapter. Keep writing!

noylj posted a comment on Friday 9th June 2006 1:36am for 9 - Attack on the Shacklebolts

Why is Harry always such a Wuss about killing a murderer? I would be worried about the MoM coming after me again and not the accidental death by self defense. Very enjoyable story, so far.

Aurilia posted a comment on Tuesday 28th February 2006 5:52pm for 9 - Attack on the Shacklebolts

Nifty! Fighting good! DE's bad! Harry good!

Three cheers for Harry!

Hip-hip-Horay!
Hip-hip-Horay!
Hip-hip-Horay!

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Monday 13th February 2006 6:38am for 9 - Attack on the Shacklebolts

Ch.9 - - No one has ever gone into Shacklebolt's personal life that I have ever read. A fascinating new avenue to consider.

Well done demonstration of Harry's new skills.

Cheers!

noylj posted a comment on Friday 30th December 2005 5:48pm for 9 - Attack on the Shacklebolts

Why do "all" fanfic authors make Harry such a little wanker? Does Harry not know that any spell could cause a death? It is like no one has ever discussed self defense with Harry...please, no Mr. Moppy for another several chapters as Harry mourns the death of a murderer...

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2005 8:27pm for 9 - Attack on the Shacklebolts

Good one but I think too much is made of killing in self defence. They drserve what they get.

gunny

Chris posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd November 2005 10:17am for 9 - Attack on the Shacklebolts

Have you considered having Harry hire additional securtiy forces. Maybe forming a Home security company, it would be big business in a time like this.

Selling alarm systems, warding property, security & medical teams that respond to emergency calls. As the Rules of aquisition state, War is good for business.

Maybe he could buy up a few apartment buildings and magically expand the apartments so that instead of small one or two bedroom flats what you have inside is a luxurious condo arrangement. Have his security forces protect the building to provide safe homes for the medium class that don't have huge ancestral properties with ancient wards protecting them.(of course the lease gives Harry the right to check for the dark mark on residents at any time without warning.)

I'm sure Kingsley and Tonks know some more good Auror's that have been fired for stupid reasons, maybe some older Auror who were forced to take early retirement. They wouldn't need to be let in on the Gryffindor secret to be useful to Harry and the war effort. Kingsley could organize and manage it when not tutoring Harry or making travel arrangements.