Greg Johnson posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 11:00am for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

Another great chapter. Can't wait for the next one. Keep up the good work.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 10:36am for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

Very good.

gunny

Prince Charon posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 10:00am for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

Interesting. You're very good at this.

Thank you for the update.

More soon, please.

AcceleratedGlass posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 9:15am for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

good chapter update soon

Brad1 posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 8:09am for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

damn cliffie's! i hate them you hopefully will have the next chapter out soon as this was one great chapter putting the human side out for harry! keep up the awesome writing!

Amamama posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 8:08am for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

Nice visit to Hogwarts, but then the dementors came? Ouch. Teasing Hermione and kevin was fun, though.

Thanks!
Berte

HermioneGreen posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 8:05am for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

Awesome! I look forward to seeing what Harry does with the jewlery. Keep up the good work.

Thanks for sharing

'Mione

Kinsfire posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 7:56am for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

...and you will now announce a six-month sabbatical to Peru after this cliffhanger...*laugh*

I like it, and thought that conversation in the stands was absolutely perfect. (And I'm betting that Kevin is smart enough to realise that, as much as it came across as a joke, Harry was serious about if Kevin hurts her.)

DJ posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 7:19am for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

YA know why did you have to leave it there LOL? Thnks for all the work and I hope you update soon.

john2 posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 6:47am for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

Discreet and Discrete are two different words that are not interchangeable. If I'm looking for something that's not too loud, it's discreet.

Quidditch is capitalized too.

Thus concludes your beta scolding.

J

Crys replied:

Discreet/Discrete: You are correct, sir.   Fixed.

On the second one . . .   Well, JKR capitalizes it, true.   But here in the States, do we capitalize baseball, football, pitcher, quarterback, etc?   Or in the UK do they capitalize football and midfielder and goalie?   Yet JKR capitalizes Quidditch, Seeker, Keeper, and Snitch.

Much as I love the world JKR has created, I disagree with some of the writing rules she uses.

jilumasam posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 6:45am for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

Oooooh!!! Nice chappie!!! Cliffie's seem to be the rage at the moment....

The Resident posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 6:37am for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

A nice little 'filler' chapter. Got caught up on Hermione and her beau and Neville and Hannah and what problems the new Minister is having. Looking forward to the next chapter. I hope you can update soon.

Treck posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 6:30am for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

Loads two AK's into a double barreled shotgun...

Damn it backfired....

Crys replied:

Treck, hasn't anyone ever told you that killing the author (twice, even) REALLY bad for the update rate?

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 6:01am for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

Oh, my, a nice cliffie!! Anyone giving odds on the cause of the cold? If it's the cause I'm thinking, I'll bet someone didn't expect Harry to be there and is going to be rather uncomfortably surprised.

Voldemort is Dead posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 5:51am for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

Love it! Is the sudden coldness due to Dementors?

Crys replied:

Do you honestly expect me to answer this question?

Chris1 posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 5:39am for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

Nooo!!!!

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You're EVIL!! I've been waiting for an update for ages, and now you give us an cliffie??!??!

Evil, I tell you!

Other than the cliffie (*glares*) this is a very nice chapter :) I like the dialogue between Harry and Hermione. You made it clear that their friendship runs deep :)

Thanks for sharing.

Chris

Crys replied:

Your control of your keyboard is slipping, Chris.   Or was the the automatic "family censor" kicking in?

Other than that, thanks for the review.   (And I'm not evil.   Saying that an attack was occurring on F&G and then not updating that story for 15 months is evil.)