John Fitzgerald posted a comment on Thursday 28th December 2006 2:16pm for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

This was a really good chapter. I hope that you will update soon. Thanks.

Bree Peeler posted a comment on Thursday 28th December 2006 2:12pm for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

GAH! Cliffie!

Wolfric posted a comment on Thursday 28th December 2006 1:05pm for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

Thanks for the chapter. I am looking forward to the next one. W

Patches posted a comment on Thursday 28th December 2006 8:24am for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

A very nice chapter. Harry and Remus have a nice outing, get to visit with friends, enjoy a Quiditch game and then, because Harry can't have a completly good day, Dementors are showing up! At least Harry and Remus should be able to fight off Dementors along with the other people Harry has taught the Patronus Charm to! Thanks for writing. I look forward to your next update. pms

chuffed55 posted a comment on Thursday 28th December 2006 2:45am for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

You are evil! Why don't you change your pen name to "cliffhanger"

JBern posted a comment on Thursday 28th December 2006 2:07am for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

Nice little cliffhanger you slipped in there at the end. What is it with those pesky dementors and quidditch matches? I figured Kevin would at least vaguely know Harry. That's the only quibble I could find with the chapter.~Jim

Vtigo posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 10:15pm for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

Cry's you are a very very evil person. You better update again soon so we can read what Harry does to those demntors. :P

kainboa posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 3:46pm for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

great story so far, really love all the harry/dumb-le-dore interaction, more of that :)

keep up the brilliant work :)

Charles Slone posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 3:39pm for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

and of course Voldy is stupid enough to send the Dementors to Hogwarts....great chapter man

jdcox61 posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 1:59pm for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

ARRRGHHHHHH!!!! A cliffhanger. What is this I didn't get any other coal for christmas?
Anyways, it's another good update, I think it's funny about how harry said tonks has methods for teaching that wouldn't work with remus. *snicker* Other that that, this is a decent filler chappie, hence the cliff. THanks for the update

Mark Safransky posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 1:40pm for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

Why do I have the feeling that the sudden cold is dementors? Ah well, Harry and a few friends will take care of them. Should be some interesting news coverage of that as well. Say, what happened to Malfoy's money? Did he have a will? Left everything to Mum? Let us know!

Crys replied:

I'll mention it later.   Short version: His mother got it.

CRose posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 1:13pm for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

Hey, an Update. What was this story about again? Heh, kidding. Good chapter and fun to read too.

Finbar posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 12:57pm for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

WOOOOO!! Dementory Goodness! Yay for Soul Sucking demons from beyond the pale! (who arent Slytherin 5th years with a predeliction for vamp like activities and a certain 'reputation')
Great chapter. I'm surprised Harry didnt make any more slightly grissly threats to Kevin, "Just so you know, I've been experimenting on combining hexes. If you hurt her, in any way, I've got a combination of explosion curse and circumcision charm with your name on it."
Great fun

Cheers

Finbar

Crys replied:

*wince*

I thought about Harry being a bit more . . . forceful in his threats, but one of my betas pointed out that he who's survived multiple deadly duels and has unwilling killed wouldn't make such a threat lightly.

'Sides, the "Explosive Castration Hex" has already been done in a fic.   Don't remember which one, but it was a re-do.   Harry was showing this hex he'd learned to Ron on the Hogwarts Express.   Scabbers was old anyway . . .

jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 12:55pm for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! Them stupid and pesky Dementoids strike again. When will they ever learn that picking a day when Harry is there is like robbing a bank with Superman in the bank. I can't wait to see what happens next. DO keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)

morriganscrow posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 12:39pm for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

Oh noes! A cliffy! Cute chapter, bring on the action!

matthiasblack posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 11:45am for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

Ooh, an attach is looming. Well I hope it is as good as the rest of your fic. Thank you for this chapter and I hope to see more soon.

The Midnight Poster posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 11:44am for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

"Suddenly too cold." WoW! For the first time I know what's comeing!



A cold snap is moving in?

Musings of Apathy posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 11:37am for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

Ah...dementors, what would a Hogwarts game be without them, especially when Remus is there with Harry. Just like old times.

The first scene was a bit confusing, what with them at the train platform and then suddenly looking at a jewelry shop without walking there, but I can understand not telling us every move they are making. You could have remedied it by having them immediately start on a leisurely walk to and through the town of Hogsmead. Your choice, it just seemed to make it a bit under-described as it is.

Thanks for writing.

Mike (MoA)

Life's a Dance posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 11:21am for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

Waiting eagerly for the next chapter due to that cliffie...Dare I guess Dementors? Evil! Evil! Evil! Bad! Ok. I'm done with my Turette's Syndrome outburst. Seriously though...Update soon please?

DrT posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 11:09am for 42 - Visit Hogsmeade

Nice chapter. Poor Kevin, but he seemed to stand up well. We'll see how eh likes dementors.

"T"