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Cassandra30 posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2011 8:20pm for 41 - Goodbye, Dursleys

Well a full grown werewolf telling that little a and old a dog he is going to make a meal out of him could scare him enough to kill him alright. I do feel sorry for Marge at losing a beloved pet though. I feel sorry for Petunia as well. Her parents were apparently not good to her. It is sad.

maddsloth posted a comment on Monday 22nd March 2010 4:34am for 41 - Goodbye, Dursleys

I was going to complain about the fact that Harry just let the Dursleys off the hook for 15 years of hell and criminal activity but then I remembered that that is pretty much how all your stories are Harry is very nice to all his enemies, Dumbledore like if you will.

But the least he should have take down the freak wards protecting their house. Why should he allow them to enjoy the protection of the very thing they abused him for?

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Friday 26th January 2007 5:51am for 41 - Goodbye, Dursleys

I don't know how i got behind, but it's great to have several chapters to read.

Killing Ripper and putting Marge's nose in it, literally, was terrific. Vernon got the Bludger approach. Petunia was left to wallow in her second-rateness. Dudley's end was poignant for Harry.

Well done.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 27th December 2006 10:10am for 41 - Goodbye, Dursleys

Good one.

gunny

Anaknisatanas posted a comment on Sunday 17th December 2006 6:12am for 41 - Goodbye, Dursleys

I loved how Remus maked Ripper keel over dead. That was priceless. I'm also pleased with the threats Harry made to Vernon. Dudley, though he really isn't much better, at least isn't as violent or cruel as he usually is.

I sincerely hope you have an update planned for this month. I love this story a lot.

Nogoalielikeme posted a comment on Saturday 16th December 2006 3:25pm for 41 - Goodbye, Dursleys

what is a bunny? oh and great story.

Crys replied:

A "bunny" is shorthand for a plot idea.  In this case, I read another story (HermanTumbleweed's "Rising Phoenix"), liked one plot element in it (Ripper getting scared - literally - to death) and used the idea in my own story.  As it wasn't my idea, I gave credit for it.

SerendipitousNightcrawler posted a comment on Thursday 7th December 2006 12:15pm for 41 - Goodbye, Dursleys

Very entertaining story. Keep up the good work

GryffindorDragon posted a comment on Tuesday 28th November 2006 5:10am for 41 - Goodbye, Dursleys

Nice story. I might have liked to see the Dursleys get more of what they deserve, but Harry has to have at least a little bit of characer, doesn't he?
I liked the part about Harry as Metamorphamagus (though JKR says he isn't one), but I think you took a wrong turn (even if a bit interesting) when you started talked about it as if it were explainable by science (shifting of muscles and fatty tissue, etc.). This is magic, after all. And as for having to retain one's mass. I think the situation of a Animagus is applicable here -- neither McGonagall nor Pettigrew nor Skeeter (and probably not Sirius nor James for that matter) retain their mass in their transformations. So I think the mass limitation is a bit unlikely for a magical transfiguration.

darthme1011 posted a comment on Monday 27th November 2006 7:24am for 41 - Goodbye, Dursleys

nice

imakeeper posted a comment on Sunday 26th November 2006 5:23am for 41 - Goodbye, Dursleys

hilarious!

Faith1 posted a comment on Sunday 26th November 2006 4:55am for 41 - Goodbye, Dursleys

Oh. My. God. HA! His kids magical!! I'm writing a fanfic about that!!!!! Anyway, GREAT idea!

Papa MidNite posted a comment on Saturday 25th November 2006 2:57am for 41 - Goodbye, Dursleys

great story so far

Renzo7 posted a comment on Saturday 25th November 2006 1:25am for 41 - Goodbye, Dursleys

Quite good, keep it up and please update soon.

Erik Wiggins posted a comment on Friday 24th November 2006 8:13am for 41 - Goodbye, Dursleys

This isn't the end of the Dursleys is it? You made it seem that Harry has something planned for them later. Yet it seems that there may be a chance for reconcilliation with Dudley. We all want to be loved by our family. Good chapter. I'm looking forward to the next.

The Resident posted a comment on Friday 24th November 2006 5:04am for 41 - Goodbye, Dursleys

This is the kind of scene I would love to see played out in JKR's next book. Personally, I think Harry was much on the High Road with the Dursleys that he'd have to look down to see up. Keep up the great work.

brad posted a comment on Thursday 23rd November 2006 10:47pm for 41 - Goodbye, Dursleys

Well, not too much to all this, just a lot of wish fulfillment, still nice to see. Glad you made Dudley a slightly more interesting character than just a simple sadist.

ShadowNixxie posted a comment on Thursday 23rd November 2006 3:13pm for 41 - Goodbye, Dursleys

I really like it so far...

ER... I don't suppose you know how I could get notified of updates to this, do you? It doesn't seem to have a system like Fanfiction.net...

Crys replied:

Just under the banner, there is a link to "Email updates".  Log in there (you're already registered) and hit the check box that you want to receive e-mail updates for Crys's Harry Potter stories.  You can sign up for all other authors and genres from the same place, too.

Claire_D posted a comment on Thursday 23rd November 2006 8:13am for 41 - Goodbye, Dursleys

"If your kids turn out to be magical, for instance." Nice one Harry :) Good chapter Crys.

Chris1 posted a comment on Thursday 23rd November 2006 12:23am for 41 - Goodbye, Dursleys

A rather slow chapter... but a nice one :) Can't wait to see what happens next :) You should be finishing this soon, though. I can't think of much else that you can do in this world... well, unless you plan on adding smut. :D

Chris

patrickokc posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd November 2006 7:42pm for 41 - Goodbye, Dursleys

Great story I do really like it...cannot wait for your updates. keep up the good work