Wanderer posted a comment on Sunday 17th November 2019 1:28am for 24 - Sep 1, pt 2

Confirmed deez, it'd be good to know what your world requires to earn the mark of such... 'service'.

Last Harper posted a comment on Thursday 21st March 2019 10:26pm for 24 - Sep 1, pt 2

I filped back a chapter because it struck me that that Nim said to Harry " your a Powerful Wizard" . I the magical world , wouldn't she say , "Powerful Man", they are all after all Magical ?

Shadowdog posted a comment on Monday 29th February 2016 8:33pm for 24 - Sep 1, pt 2

Low-key chapter showing the dedication to keeping Hogwarts safe while being saddened by crappy choices. Quick interaction from a distance with his friends was very good insert as well.

reader1writer1 posted a comment on Wednesday 8th June 2011 6:10pm for 24 - Sep 1, pt 2

I think it's great that the ward went up. I hope folks note that death eaters were found in all four houses

Cassandra30 posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2011 6:01pm for 24 - Sep 1, pt 2

<sigh> It was sad. As for Crabbe ad Goyle, I honestly believe they may not ever had another choice.

dougal74 posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd June 2008 7:55am for 24 - Sep 1, pt 2

good chapter

Aurilia posted a comment on Tuesday 28th February 2006 8:44pm for 24 - Sep 1, pt 2

Sad, yes, but it needed done. Good show.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Monday 13th February 2006 11:02am for 24 - Sep 1, pt 2

Ch.24 - - This was sad, but necessary. And Dumbledore gets credit for what he should have initiated.

The world is upside down. But this story is wonderful.

atlantis-rob posted a comment on Thursday 5th January 2006 12:38pm for 24 - Sep 1, pt 2

Damn fine chapter Crys! Excellent job with the setup for the search, the hedges were truly inspired! And great job with harry and cissy's talk too. CheerS!

brad posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd January 2006 4:45pm for 24 - Sep 1, pt 2

Nice to see some motherly sentiment from Narcissa for her one and only offspring; I had thought her abandoning him so quickly before was a bit unrealistic. She still seems cold to me, but I appreciate that some stuff is off camera.

"The entire past month has been surreal" - heh.

Glad to see the kiddie DEs caught out; this is a precaution which just makes good sense. And good fun to read about.

Aww, I want Harry to make up with his friends (particularly Hermoine). You're going to do it eventually, aren't you? Please?

shadowhc posted a comment on Monday 2nd January 2006 10:02am for 24 - Sep 1, pt 2

great work .. ireally liked ur story..

Jarvey posted a comment on Saturday 31st December 2005 12:52pm for 24 - Sep 1, pt 2

Great story, keep up the excellent work!

makotochi posted a comment on Friday 30th December 2005 4:13pm for 24 - Sep 1, pt 2

Great story. Has anyone ever tried to write a story concerning the many bunnies?

rebirthofham posted a comment on Wednesday 28th December 2005 9:21am for 24 - Sep 1, pt 2

lovely.

Jennifer2 posted a comment on Tuesday 27th December 2005 7:53am for 24 - Sep 1, pt 2

Please hurry and write some more.

hpfan_4life posted a comment on Tuesday 27th December 2005 5:57am for 24 - Sep 1, pt 2

Awesome update. Can't wait to find out what happens next.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 26th December 2005 6:22am for 24 - Sep 1, pt 2

Good story. Can't wait for more.

gunny

Erin posted a comment on Sunday 25th December 2005 6:31pm for 24 - Sep 1, pt 2

great update looking forward to the next. Happy Holidays

Prince Charon posted a comment on Sunday 25th December 2005 3:25pm for 24 - Sep 1, pt 2

Very, very interesting.

More soon, please.

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Saturday 24th December 2005 11:26pm for 24 - Sep 1, pt 2

Mousetrapped!Dumbledore...I love it! (Harry set up the new ward, but forced Dumbledore to take credit for it.) UNfortunately, the new net catches some fish (including Jack Sloper, one of the Gryffindor Beaters, as well as a Ravenclaw, a Hufflepuff, and several Slytherins, including Crabbe and Goyle, but NOT Malfoy). MLE Director ("Call me Amelia") Bones personally clamped the manacles on all the Marked students. A giggling Amelia?