Wanderer posted a comment on Sunday 17th November 2019 12:38am for 21 - Aug 31 pt 1

A purple owl giving a resigned hoot... oh, the twins! got it. lol

Shite... look at that, Draco went and grew up! I'ma gonna go over here and be stunned a bit. (Mostly because you set that up perfectly and then delivered it quite well.)

What a mess with Molly, and of course Ron is about the ultimate momma's boy :-/

sylvelle posted a comment on Sunday 27th January 2013 7:06pm for 21 - Aug 31 pt 1

I loved the Riddle article idea.

reader1writer1 posted a comment on Wednesday 8th June 2011 4:23pm for 21 - Aug 31 pt 1

Loved it! I do love the goblins :)

Cassandra30 posted a comment on Monday 6th June 2011 5:26pm for 21 - Aug 31 pt 1

What a great day! Harry does need to help Draco if he can. If Lucius leaves the country permanently it will help.

dougal74 posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd June 2008 7:13am for 21 - Aug 31 pt 1

another great chapter

Aberbadger posted a comment on Wednesday 16th August 2006 10:30am for 21 - Aug 31 pt 1

Just as long as Tonks isn't portraying herself as the Mull of Kinsfire!!!

noylj posted a comment on Friday 9th June 2006 6:58am for 21 - Aug 31 pt 1

As a body guard, you do not open doors for your client, you do not carry packages for your client, and you do not drive for your client (you have an assigned guard to the duty). You keep your eyes open and hands empty at all times. You are not a servant. You are not a gopher. You are not a babysitter. Your duties are clearly specified and you walk away from any client who will not follow them.

jessica posted a comment on Thursday 8th June 2006 1:33pm for 21 - Aug 31 pt 1

ooh, i really don't like how u portrayed molly weasley. she has acted a little over bearing and protective, but she always knew who lupin was, and she's a woman that talked of scarlet women, there's no way she'd come out and accuse tonks like that. mrs. weasley also wouldn't be stupid enough to try in front of harry--she isn't a manipulator like dumbledore could possibly be in fan fic stories; i feel as if u took her character flaw and made it her entire character, which i don't think is good writing.(but i do still wanna see what happens in your story!)

Aurilia posted a comment on Tuesday 28th February 2006 8:02pm for 21 - Aug 31 pt 1

Fan-bloody-tastic! Squee!

Love the last bit best.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Monday 13th February 2006 10:12am for 21 - Aug 31 pt 1

Ch.21 - - The complexities of this story are thrilling. I like they way everything happens.

The dialogue is well done indeed. The characterizations of this type of Dumbledore-free Harry is amazing. Tonks as the girlfriend is not tawdry at all for 16 and 22 year olds.

The insights KS gives into pureblood wizarding is an excellent view of a byzantine world.

Merle Corey posted a comment on Friday 3rd February 2006 6:24pm for 21 - Aug 31 pt 1

Excellent, excellent job on the Weasley confrontation. Harry saying what he needed to without blowing his top. Molly is a dear, but I'm glad you had Harry take her to task.

atlantis-rob posted a comment on Monday 19th December 2005 2:00pm for 21 - Aug 31 pt 1

Good chapter once again Crys! I really liked the whole thing a lot. The bit with Malfoy was excellent as were harry's confrontations with Molly and later his talk with Hermione. Good work also on the teasing with Tonks about the shower. Can't wait to read the next bit now! Cheers!

Chris15 posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2005 2:21pm for 21 - Aug 31 pt 1

Loved this chapter.

Tonks act was great. Can't wait to see what Witch Weekly prints about 'her'. Especially when they can't dig up info on who she is.

If Tonks is going to be someone different everytime then maybe she shold look like a Veela one time. I can just imagine all the girls upset about poor Harry being stolen by a Veela's charm.

Liked your characterization of Draco. he seems to be sitting on the fence, wonder what will push him off it.

Bad Mrs. Weasley hope someone shows her how wrong she is. I wonder what her children think about this, has she tried to control their lives too-is that why all the older kids move out as soon as possible.

Loved the characterization of Ron and Hermione, Harry has matured faster than them and their friendship is suffering for it. Hope Hermione and Ron grow up soon and repair the damage.

Loved the WWW board meeting. Can't wait to see what products the twins come out with for their spy line. Maybe some glasses that show you what is all around you(360) like those glasses that have the mirrors in the outside position so you can see behind you.
Makes it hard for people to sneak up on you.

One small mistake, you never said what Ingid looked like. Kinda hard to envision a scene without discription.

Later
Chris

japanese_jew posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2005 2:36am for 21 - Aug 31 pt 1

hmmm... Wayne's world was released in '92 (I'm doubtful of whether or not Gred and Forge know who Alice Cooper is, however) but... is the chicken thing from an SNL skit? That might be anachronistic. (I vaguely remember an SNL skit with a rubber chicken-as-gavel, but it's probably not where you got the idea)

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2005 2:25am for 21 - Aug 31 pt 1

Anyone for Shack-bashing?

It seems like the former Auror takes his turn on the wrong end of the hammer (especially from Tonks).

Surprise #2: Narcissa Black (yes, you read that right) is leaving Lucius. Amazingly, Draco is NOT in a snit over it (in fact, he is considering bailing himself).

Meanwhile, Harry asks for an audit of Bella's last two years worth of transactions from Gringott's. He is also in a bit of a snit with Molly, Ron, and Hermione.

David Thacker posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2005 1:41am for 21 - Aug 31 pt 1

Love the use of kinsfires name.That was great.