Wen posted a comment on Monday 7th November 2005 11:14am for 18 - Visit to Hogwarts

Here it comes...

Good chapter, update soon!

Rachael posted a comment on Monday 7th November 2005 10:48am for 18 - Visit to Hogwarts

*Is ignoring the H/T relationship that just squicks me out in this otherwise excellent story*

Great chapter, as usual, Crys. However, small nit-pick...LV opened the Chamber of Secrets when he was 16 (hence Myrtle haunting the bathroom she died in when he unleashed the basilisk), so wouldn't he know of the chamber?

Otherwise, great job.

Regards,
Rachael
*a rabid H/G shipper who decided to continue reading the story anyway *pouts*

Greg Johnson posted a comment on Monday 7th November 2005 10:42am for 18 - Visit to Hogwarts

Great chapter! Very intersting ending.
I'm guessing that there was no risk with the Chamber since you didn't go into that too much. Will we find out if they used the Basilisk for potions or did they sell it?
Keep up the good work and update again soon.

Anonymous Reviewer posted a comment on Monday 7th November 2005 10:19am for 18 - Visit to Hogwarts

The more I read this story the more I like it. Execpt for a couple of the personal things that resemble my life, (I don't know you, do I?) this story has everything that I like to read in a HP fic.

Rowan Mikaio posted a comment on Monday 7th November 2005 10:04am for 18 - Visit to Hogwarts

*confused*

I thought Amelia assured him that he wouldn't be required to testify.

Update soon, please!

~rowan

M. R. Moore posted a comment on Monday 7th November 2005 9:36am for 18 - Visit to Hogwarts

I have that old song eye of the tiger stuck in my head.

anyways, great job.

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Monday 7th November 2005 9:06am for 18 - Visit to Hogwarts

Oy...Harry does some warding (and apparently includes a Nibbler Detector Ward in the mix) at Hogwarts. This is a surprise...Harry, but no Albus. (Even though Harry *is* Lord Gryffindor, it still seems Rather Weird to have a student *replace* the Headmaster in the warding of the school. In addition to, maybe, but instead of? Just what is Albus up to?)
Also, Harry and his new girlfriend (along with Kingsley) nip off to the Chamber to harvest some basilisk parts, and they get an owl from the Ministry regarding the attack at the Shacklebolts.

Anonymous Reviewer posted a comment on Monday 7th November 2005 8:40am for 18 - Visit to Hogwarts

I just went through all of the reviews and I must have done something wrong since one of my reviews wasn't there. It said that since Tonks is in a demanding "Male" dominated job she must be skilled and tough and must take pride in her skills, and not to have Harry hold back, when dueling, now that they are dating, on her. If read this review first then other one second it makes more sense. I am enjoying this story and hope you continue.

Anonymous Reviewer posted a comment on Monday 7th November 2005 8:27am for 18 - Visit to Hogwarts

blinks in surprise. Most of my girlfriends would have me over a pit if I held back on them.... Most of the girls/women I've dated have been into martal arts and most of the time we fought as a form of fore-play....... As one girlfriend put it "get the blood flowing then really get the blood flowing!" The best sex was after a "fight" were I broke my girlfriends ribs, and she didn't even say anything until after. If you know what you are doing, fighting or dueling can get erotic and sensual........ The same girlfriend once told me that when we are "fighting" and I hold back not to hurt her, I show that I have no respect for her talent and skill, and if I didn't have respect for her skill, I must not have respect for her........

Zevrillion posted a comment on Monday 7th November 2005 7:21am for 18 - Visit to Hogwarts

Liked the new chapter. Can't wait for more.