EricThorsen posted a comment on Thursday 23rd October 2008 4:48am for Veela History

This story worked out very well. It contains enough elements to form a cohesive storyline, and yet completes its own plot line without demanding more story time. This is not to say this wouldn't make a great scene in a longer story, just that it can stand on its own quite well. Good work.

davidiusbrown posted a comment on Thursday 23rd October 2008 1:34am for Veela History

I knew it. They're out for our precious bodily fluids.

gadriam posted a comment on Thursday 23rd October 2008 1:34am for Veela History

A very interesting take on the Veela, and an intriguing tale altogether. I bow to your superior storytelling, but i miss the twist. This story feels very incomplete, like it was supposed to go on a few more sentences. Ah well. It matters little. Thank you.

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Crys replied:

No twist.   Just had the idea of where the veela actually came from and wrote it out.

The scene continuation. . . ah, I don't write lemon. :)

Ben Russell-Gough posted a comment on Thursday 23rd October 2008 12:37am for Veela History

Interesting theory. I don't know how unique it is but it certainly fits in with what we know about Veela (and, more importantly, would explain why a lot of Wizards look down on them as 'beasts').

A bit wordy and light on description but this is just a collection of one-shot ideas so you can get away with that. ;-)