Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Thursday 27th September 2007 5:22am for Never Let Go

Nice part here, and really liked the way things went here with the three of them, and I would much rather have had this pair than canon for some reason.

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Thursday 27th September 2007 5:08am for Never Let Go

Great line: "No, no; look behind you."

Very cute. Good chapter, thanks for sharing it with us.

vertru posted a comment on Thursday 27th September 2007 5:02am for Never Let Go

Crys, my friend, I hate to admit this but I think you may have a sicker sense of humor than I. Oh well, it was bound to happen sooner or later. Anyway, I forgot I had read the earlier chapters and just now read the whole thing. Have to say some of your scenarios are both fun and unique. Now the chapter previous to this one i had not read and found the ending to be quite poignant. The whole story made one think about what comes next. I just cannot see the HP as written in the first five books ever going to work as an Auror. He would want to do something exciting, but cop work ain't all that exciting the vast majority of the time. Anyway, this last chapter was really quite interesting in the way the girls became stuck to him. I loved Hermione's solution, and truly thought that was the only logical outcome. However, it was done in such a way that it was still a surprise. Good job on that.

Vern

Ben Russell-Gough posted a comment on Thursday 27th September 2007 4:33am for Never Let Go

Eep! Yeah, I think that the dream ended at the interesting bit too.

Well, an interesting possible start to a H/Hr/G triofic. With your permission, I might even try to make the bunny into a Godzilla (full-length story). It would be interesting to see how this situation works out in the long run, especially as the oath will always require fidelity and support if not physical contact...

Then there is the fun of explaining to Arthur, Molly and the Grangers why their very underage daughters are suddenly both getting married... to the same boy. :-p

An interesting little AU possibility. Well written too!

BenRG's Rating: 8/10

Crys replied:

If you want to use the idea (or even what's written as a springboard), you're welcome to do so.   All I ask is a link when you're done and an honorable mention in the A/N.

Glad you enjoyed it.

David Thacker posted a comment on Thursday 27th September 2007 3:48am for Never Let Go

That was funny and a great start to new story.

DrT posted a comment on Thursday 27th September 2007 3:40am for Never Let Go

Very cute little story. If it had been Luna and Hermione, I'd adopt it <g>

"T"

Crys replied:

Hey, if you want to use it as a springboard, you're welcome to do so.   The bunny's out of my system now, so I certainly won't keep others from using it so long as I get an honorable mention in the A/N.

Gardengirl posted a comment on Thursday 27th September 2007 3:35am for Never Let Go

Poor slob, to be awakened at that point! The consummation(s) would have been amazing. Thanks for sharing.

Lostchyld posted a comment on Thursday 27th September 2007 2:47am for Never Let Go

I'd kind of like to see this one play out a bit more.

Christopher Patton posted a comment on Thursday 27th September 2007 2:43am for Never Let Go

Cute story, it would be fun to see it expanded out to see the reaction of everyone else as they were told and understood the implications.

Plus, I always like the opportunity to read some well written H/HR/G stories.

Thanks...

Cliff Bryner posted a comment on Thursday 27th September 2007 2:31am for Never Let Go

I enjoyed this. And, it looks like you are going in a very interesting direction. I joyfully anticipate your next installment.

Particle_Accelerator posted a comment on Thursday 27th September 2007 2:18am for Never Let Go

Hey, I liked this one! The whole premise would be a nice little ficlet to extend if you're ever so inclined. Nice job!

Robert Owen posted a comment on Thursday 27th September 2007 2:01am for Never Let Go

Oh my, LoL! Poor Harry. I'm really looking forward to seeing the reactions of Mrs Granger & Mrs Weasley. LoL

Robert

sanghamitra posted a comment on Thursday 27th September 2007 1:48am for Never Let Go

god this is awful !! awfully funny that is ...

Charles Slone posted a comment on Thursday 27th September 2007 12:41am for Never Let Go

*laughs lightly* glad to see your back Ryan and heres to more "Why does it always happen to me" HP stories lol

Crys replied:

Glad you enjoyed it.

BTW, my name isn't Ryan.   My yahoo account was named after my first OC in the Chessman Chronicles.