Scion of Gryffindor

great chapter

Ah yes, this is where our ways part.

Once again a story of a money-driven Harry who is completely focused on money and property.
How shallow.

And I'd like to congratulate you for being number x+1 of the authors who have focused on Dumbledore-bashing, creating an hypocritical Harry who accusses others while doing the very same as them.
Everyone seems to strife for a mature, independet Harry, which results in Harry being very immature and stupid.

Seriously I am fed up with all the people not realizing Dumbledores motives for his actions.
What is Harry? Some super-teenager who can deal with any kind of problem and can take all the negative information? Tell you what: had Dumbledore informed Harry of all the implications and obstacles, Harry would have committed suicide. In fifth year he was almost at the end when he suffered from his dreams, if Dumbledore had told him: "Oh by the way, Voldemort might occupy your body anytime", Harry would have distanced himself from everyone, becoming utterly depressed and completely incapeable of anything. A wrack. Dumbledore had almost everything laid out best for Harry, seeing farther then anyone else, and the reason why most things went wrong was because people did not listen. They did not listen, no, they insisted on doing things their own way. Got them really far, did it not? Very successful in terms of money as your story lines out, I would say. Sirius dead making Harry rich, which seems to be oh-so-positive, because Harry does not have enough fame and attention as it is, and enjoys that yes?
From all the HP Fanfics out there, 35% of the authors are actually capeable of writing a good story. From those another 40% develop a good plot. And from those 40%, 95% fail to keep to character, use logic, common sense or learned how to construct a story that actually does not overload. Harry turns out to be Godrics hire, has 1000 estates, is incredible rich, has new talents, hears Sirius will, bashes Dumbledore etc. etc.
Plot development and time control does not ring a bell, does it?

But you know what? You do not have to be ashamed, really, because almost every other authors does the same, really. Maybe I failed to notice stepping through a door with the doorplate saying "sanatorium". I give it up, finding a good story that is. Everyone seems to have set disappointing me as his blazing life goal.

Harry's milking it! He's milking everything he just found out about. I bet Dumbledore's frustrated. A lot of people, I have just realized, don't like Dumbledore. As in readers. So, Harry's quitting school? Are you crazy?!?! Good chapter, as always. Keep writing!

I really love how this is unfolding. I've always had a soft spot for Uber!Harry. I hope he ruins the Dursleys, too. Lemme see...

Fumbledork
Fudge-packer
Dursleys-schmursleys
Ferret McPoncy Von Death Gobbler
Daddy McPoncy Von Death Gobbler
Fellatrix the Weirdo
Moldywart

Did I miss anyone from Harry's shite-list? I hope not. I wanna see them all ruined. Or dead.

Ch.4 - - I hate it when Dumbledore goes this direction in a flc. But I love the Harry that comes out of it. I'm torn and conflicted.

I like this story very much. Decisive Harry is always a great guy to see in action.

Fun, fun, FUN!

I have to admit that I am not a big fan of Dumbledore bashing, but I love this!!!

So far, so good. I hope that you will cover the four events that all good fanfics cover: LV's death, Doubledumb's death, Lucius's death, and Draco's death. If you could include Snape's death, that would be icing on the cake.

Going back over the story, Tonks' LACK of embarrassment over Remus' teasing comment SHOULD have set off the alarums for Harry right then! However, I can understand why it didn't, as Harry had already had a rough day to that point.

Good one.

gunny