Scion of Gryffindor
By Crys
great chapter, and a food fight at the end, GREAT... keep up the good work!
Finally catching up on my FFA reviews now...heheh. Anyways, great job with this entire chapter, and overall the way the whole story has been flowing in the next whole bunch of chapters. The talk with the rest of the teens was great especially Neville and the DA and how the mini food fight happened. Great job on the continued growth of h/t relationship. Cheers!
Its absolutely great. please continue it very very soon!
Love the story, can't wait for more....UPDATE PLZ!!!!
good story you have going here, keep up the good work.
You missed the one part of a real teen party that just throws the whole thing out of whack: a boatload of alcohol. Especially in Britain, where booze is extremely easy to get if you are 16, as opposed to just easy in America.
I need more. Now.
Oi! Update this one... (That is I, the demanding, unpaying reader demanding your time and effort.... hmm... Promise I'll review?)
*laugh* At least you have a sense of humor about it your demands :)
You'll be happy to know that the next chapter is at beta, but is unlikely to get posted for a couple weeks. Real Life (tm) is being a pest both to me and my betas. Sorry, but that's the
best we can do right now.
I really like where you're going with this. Keep it up.
Sorry to not have reviewed any earlier chapters, this is one of those stories that grabs you and doesn't let go. But now that this is the last currently posted chapter I have a chance to stop and
think.
In general, I love what you've done here, if I have any big issues its with Remus, but I understand that take on him. I've never seen Fudge as being his own man, and I had always wondered who was
pulling his strings in the background.
Is there a magic that sees through morphs?
Hmm. A sufficiently powerful Revealing Spell might . Interesting question.
That was a funny end for a chapter.
We all are waiting for the next one.
I really love this story. I especially love the banter between Tonks and Harry and I can't wait until they further thier relationships. PLEASE UPADATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!
An awsome story. I thought it kinda funny that you're pulling names (Kinsfire, Bob & Alyx) from other authors. Please update soon!
I truely love this story. There was a similar theme on FF.com that kinda made Harry with Hermione the controling factor in the wizarding world (King and Queen) but the effect is that Harry was never allowed to find our about the Potter line and Heritage and made enemies with DD over being kept in the dark.
I love this chapter! I was laughing like crazy throughout the whole time. I really liked the end of this chapter- the accidental incident..lol
Oooooooo! Great ending to this chapter! Can't wait for more! Bravo!
You're doing a great job on this story. Like the story.
(Bob Alyx)and, huh? I wonder where you could have gotten that *raises eyebrow* </sarcasm>
I hate that you can't insinuate things as well online
anyway, *sits patiently for next chapter*
tata, and good work!
~Rowan
That was hilarious. I just found your fic today and as it was my day off, I decided to treat myself to a nice long fic. Ha. Anyway, good job, normally I don't like het fics. Unless it
Harry/Luna...and Harry/Tonks has just joined the ranks...you het writers are converting me! Update soon, cheers!
~Ivy
"you het writers are converting me!"
*laugh* Well, slash isn't to my taste, but I'm glad that this unrepentant het writer is providing at least some entertainment for you!
good chapter