Scion of Gryffindor
By Crys
Poor Remus! Jeez, Harry burst, huh? I personally thought Tonks' joke was funny. No hidden meaning? My fingers just un-crossed themselves. What happened to her crush? I guess she just gave up. Mushrooms? Bunnies? Why does Ginny keep asking about the wooing? Is she hoping, 'cause I'll join! Tell Sally to feel better! Awesome Chapter (Harry yelling is pretty fun to read)! Keep writing!
*gathering explosives*
excuse me while I go destroy the ministry
story is awesome, I'm gonna go read more now
GRRRRRRRRRRRR.
See earlier comment about Hermione.
DOWN WITH THE MINISTRY!!!!!!!!!!
Kill 'em all and let the gods sort it out!
Ch.12 - - Someone may not have thought they declared war on Harry, but he will certainly now declare war on the person(s) with the werewolf law.
I am not sure I like the fight between H & Hr, but it is a good plot device and interesting to follow.
I cannot see where the Ginny or Tonks things are going.
Great fic.
Fudge is such a git, needs to be replaced.
gunny
48 greats?
there were 47 earlier [yes, I counted too ;)]
I'm really enjoying this so far
I'm really enjoying your story so far. Very well put together, and quite engrossing. I've lost count of the number of times that I've read through it, each time eagerly hoping for another addition. Please keep up the good work.
you could always do what i did to fudge. I had his 'secretary' let an assassin into his office, shot him 3 times in the chest. (evil grin) It was fun.
Ouch, angst^a. Harry still has style, even if his temper is going beyond dangerous in the direction of suicidal. No point making ordinary enemies I suppose, he has to aim for the biggest and best. Ministers, Headmasters, seniors of every variety and one of two with sufficient brains, attitude and sheer righteous indignation to kick his sorry tail from here to Halifax. The Heir thing is much, much better done than usual; I like Godric already. Remus spot on, Tonks even better, Ginny welcome for comic relief and Dumbledore a mystery, but a good one so far. I don't think he's *that* bad, yet. A brave fan to keep battering now - it's amazing how few are willing to besmirch the dead. Even if they never lived. I love it, keep going, update soon
Well I'm slowly working my way through the multichapter stories on fanficauthors and this one isn't bad. I liked the chapter lengths in your unknown powers better than here. These chapters seem a
shorter.
Can't wait for the next update :)
The Ministry is in soooo much trouble.
Ouch, a Werewolf law! That's gonna piss Harry off. :-) Keep up the good work and update again soon.
What a great chapter in an already excellent story! I love the new option to leave you a review without having to jump back on the yahoo group. I can't wait to see what the new site looks
like!
Excellent update, but as usual, too short for my liking ;) I wish they'd be 3 times as long, but that's just me.
Poor Harry. It was inevitable that he crack under the pressure sooner or later, and I like the way you had him handle it, and apologizing to everyone later. I can't wait to see what happens with this
new werewolf law...pissed!Harry is sure to make another appearance (US "pissed", not UK"pissed" ;) )
Great work, and I hope it's not long before cpt. 13!
Is Harry going to realize that the advice Hermoine gave, though somewhat arrogantly phrased, was good? That he was feeling depressed and most of Hermoine's requests when she feels strongly about
something are worded as imperatives? That her actual demand was that he find someone to talk to about how he feels, seeking professional attention only if he could not trust those around him or
Hermoine herself?
Finally, why do so many writers feel sorry for the werewolves? I'm not sure what making them check in, but not detaining them, is supposed to accomplish. Locking them down during the full moon and
killing any that refuse would eliminate (or reduce to near zero) the number of new bites. In a generation it could eliminate the curse in the country. It may be demeaning to current werewolves but it
could save countless others from getting the curse or dying in werewolf attacks. At the very least, the punishment for creating another werewolf or killing a human while a werewolf should be death
(or life with the dementors, but death seems more humane).
Bill


good chapter