Scion of Gryffindor
By Crys
An interesting story so far.
Did you know that Harry is actually a shortened form of Henry?
Yes, usually. Per the Lexicon, Harry is his full first name, though.
I was going to ask about Henry's name; that's very interesting. I hope it was a hint! The owls; ew! Very interesting, that Harry owns Knockturn Alley. Anyway, this chapter was great. Keep writing!
Much as I like your story up to this point, I gotta say that I'm disappointed in Harry. Doubting Hermione's friendship because he didn't like her letter? That's pretty cold--I mean, the woman has
stood at his back against Death Eaters, flown with him on a hippogryff to rescue his godfathather, healed his wounds, fed him when his own relatives wouldn't, helped him prepare for the maze, and so
on and so on. She's earned more than a little slack.
I hope this is just emotional upset, and that he gets over it soon. Hermione's had to deal with too many of Harry's tantrums already.
Otherwise, I gotta say that this is an intriguing story. I'm enjoying "Grampa Godric" a lot.
Amiable Dorsai
Yes, Harry's reaction to Hermione is cold and OoC. It was planned that way, though. Read on. It gets resolved and explained a bit.
hhmm, i'm readin your story, and i think it's really funny this is a harry/tonks, but that he flirts with ginny in those letters! that's totally what he does in other fics when he likes her,lol!!!
Nifty! Harry owns Knockturn Alley! He should level it and introduce the Wizarding World to the wonderfulness that is theme-parks.
*laugh* Now THAT is a fun idea!
Ch.11 - - Clever about the Hedwig/Henry connection. I was trying to read something into the Kings Henry in British history.
Fascinating conversation betweeen M. Bones and Harry.
Lots of complexities in this tale to chew on - nice!
Very good, although I hate it that Susan is dead. Always liked her.
gunny
Harry rolled his eyes. "Call me Harry, please. This 'Lord Potter' thing makes me think someone important is standing behind me."
Henry, still perched on Harry's chair back, hooted.
HAHAHAHHAAH :) Oh god, I totally laughed out loud, big belly chuckles...which made my computer bounce ;) lol.... :) hahahaha, thanks. that was great.
good chapter