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Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Wednesday 29th January 2014 7:38pm for Elementals

Now that was a fun one and most enjoyable. It would be interesting to see more of Harry interacting with these Elementals in other situations rather than simply teaching.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Friday 26th November 2010 12:08am for Elementals

And a hope that your Thanksgiving, if you celebrate it, was also quite happy.

This was a fun bit and I quite enjoyed the various personalities of the different Elementals. 'Twould be fun to see them together, perhaps enjoying a poker night with Harry.

Wolfric posted a comment on Thursday 25th November 2010 2:36pm for Elementals

Good story. I like stories where Harry is living a reasonably pleasent life after all the turmoil. My questions would be: How do you know how many elementals you can control and what happens if you try to control more than your capability? It is good to hear from you again. Thanks for writing. W.

Crys replied:

The nice version:
Part of the ritual to call up another elemental is a test of magical strength. If you fail the test, you can't pull any more.

The not-so nice version:
If you have too many, some/all will break loose from their control. Whether they simply "go home" or try to attack you is up to them.

Thanks for the review.

David Thacker posted a comment on Thursday 25th November 2010 4:02am for Elementals

That was great and most likely the closets{spelling? or right word} to what they might be if they where real keep up the great work with this story and your other.

wolfkin posted a comment on Wednesday 24th November 2010 4:50pm for Elementals

"The concept of Elementals as explained here is loosely based on the early Shadowrun novels." Thought I recognized it. Really liked this chapter/story and would like to see the elemental characters in another story, if possible. Good work, as usual! ^_^

QOShea posted a comment on Wednesday 24th November 2010 3:46pm for Elementals

Very nice, would love to see this fleshed out if you want to continue it.

Ancalador posted a comment on Wednesday 24th November 2010 3:45pm for Elementals

Interesting way of setting out drabbles. Some interesting ideas there, I especially like the idea of Harry growing up and befriending a group of elementals that actually have personalities of their own.

Keep up the good work

Patches posted a comment on Wednesday 24th November 2010 2:32pm for Elementals

This is really interesting. Thanks for a unique view of something I have heard but not really understood before. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more Dream Journals. pms

Clell65619 posted a comment on Wednesday 24th November 2010 9:23am for Elementals

- Nice. This is an example of elemental magic I've not seen before.